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- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:13 PM
- quick preference
- what other antlers albums have you listened to?
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:13 PM
- I know I've listened to one other
- cause my friend who loves them linked it to me
- I can't remember which off hand
- it may have been Undersea
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:15 PM
- undersea is a good one! further into the story tho
- for a brief background
- this story stars Caramel
- who is a background pony i wrote a lot about back in the day, apparently no one gives a fuck about him anymore? bizarre
- he's the caramel coated, brown maned stallion that shows up in ponyville marketplace/the apple family stead a lot
- anyway, caramel's mother when she was younger ventured deep into the everfree when she was younger
- and met a tribe of deer that lives deep in the heart of the everfree
- she moved there, fell in love with a stag, and had caramel
- there was a wildfire (since yknow the everfree is completely unregulated and all)
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:17 PM
- makes sense
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:17 PM
- and they had to leave
- caramel's father is horribly wounded in the fire
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:18 PM
- :<
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:21 PM
- sorry got distracted briefly
- anyway so he manages to get caramel's mom back to ponyville
- and he succumbs to his injuries
- caramel's mom gets him to ponyville general but it's not enough
- and he spends the next few months slowly dying from the burns/infections/etc (not described in detail bc this isnt that kind of story)
- this impacts a lot of caramel's
- very early memories
- of his mother going to visit his father in hospice as he slowly dies
- some time flash forwards and caramel's mom is becoming
- weirder
- more spiritual, and more distant
- caramel spends a lot of time alone
- but soon makes friends at ponyville elementary
- specifically big mac and thunderlane
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:23 PM
- nods
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:24 PM
- he spends a lot of time at sweet apple acres
- since thunderlane doesnt have the best homelife himself
- (thunderlane's story is for brand new's albums though)
- but the three become inseparable
- and soon, caramel is basically living at sweet apple acres
- one night, when he goes home after spending about a week at SAA
- he finds his mom is gone
- with nothing more than a note saying "sorry"
- he spends his teens between sweet apple acres and his old home
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:26 PM
- sounds lonely
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:26 PM
- it was
- he had big mac and thunderlane though
- even if big mac had the death of his parents and thunderlane had lots of fucking to do
- distracting them both
- but they still stood by him
- eventually, caramel falls in love with Roseluck
- who is of course part of the flower trio
- Daisy and Lily being the other two
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:27 PM
- yep yep!
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:27 PM
- Roseluck is in a relationship with Lily
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:27 PM
- oh
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:27 PM
- who is Daisy's stepsister
- Roseluck is very much a lesbian
- but she loves caramel dearly
- just platonically
- they get along really well
- caramel spends a good deal of time trying to come forward about his feelings
- and can never manage to
- daisy is also one of thunderlane's long term friends
- and she is v important to the brand new stories
- with some overlap to the antlers ones
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:29 PM
- ah, okay
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:29 PM
- after a few years of this pink triangle bullshit
- caramel meets minuette
- or rather, who he believes is minuette
- after a few months of dating
- minuette reveals she's a changeling
- this is long before s6
- so changelings are mostly beholden to chrysalis
- and unreformed
- this one is more of a
- solitary locust
- though
- like Thorax
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:30 PM
- mmhmm, makes sense
- they're kinda... the ones that don't fit
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:31 PM
- she's scared and terrified, she runs and hides and blends in constantly
- she reveals some of her deepest, darkest secrets to caramel
- and he does to her in kind
- at this point, we are caught up to where Hospice begins
- the prologue starts as thus:
- Caramel is in his old family home
- trying to make himself some tea
- but he can't shake the feeling of being chastised
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:32 PM
- oh dear
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:33 PM
- as if he's doing something wrong
- at all times
- and he keeps seeing shadowy figures in his home
- some very equine
- almost motherly in presence
- and others insectoid
- rapidly changing shape
- and terrifying
- he hits down at the table
- places two caramels in his tea
- and closes his eyes as he begins to remember
- in kettering
- we are presented with an adult caramel
- probably same age as the mane six, maybe slightly younger
- this is set about season 1
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:38 PM
- oh, okay?
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:40 PM
- sorry, had to pause to grab some water
- my b
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:40 PM
- no no, you're good! I'm listening! Erm, reading
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:40 PM
- anyway at this point, he has been volunteering at the ponyville hospice
- for a long time
- since he was a late teenager
- this time, he goes in
- not expecting anything
- his last "patient" (he's more there as someone to keep ponies company)
- died a few months ago and they've told him there's nopony else currently who is in need of his services
- but when he goes in this time
- they give him somepony new
- it's a pegasus mare from Phillydelphia
- moved to ponyville to raise her colt
- contracted terminal bone cancer and is now in hospice
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:42 PM
- oof
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:42 PM
- when he first gets there
- she's pretty reluctant to talk to him
- rude, really
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:44 PM
- which, fair. A common reaction when you're in hospice.
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:44 PM
- of course
- especially since she's about
- mid thirties
- most of the other patients are very old
- her life was literally right in stride
- and she got slapped with this
- caramel manages to make some headway on his first visit
- she goes from "actively hostile" to "cautiously hostile"
- and the things he learns about her, her life in phillydelphia, her foal
- the more he begins to develop an emotional connection to her
- but there's something lurking in the back of his mind
- waiting
- gnawing
- like a hungry, hungry locust
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:46 PM
- oh dear
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:46 PM
- he leaves the hospice
- and enter Sylvia
- the chapter anyway
- Solitaire is the name of the changeling
- she was para's oc she used the most
- an abused, lost changeling
- disconnected from the hive, desperately pretending to be ponies to feed and feel
- her preferred pony form was minuette
- she seemed harmless
- i also started writing this fic in 2013 before para or minuette had proper development
- so i did some synthesis nonsense
- after both events occurred (very close to one another in fact!)
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:48 PM
- makes sense
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:48 PM
- the uh
- para incident
- happened two days before the s5 premier
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:48 PM
- :<
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:48 PM
- the show has a very clear divide for me as such
- anyway, solitaire/minuette is very abusive and flippant
- and she's been so used to changing identities
- she rapidly flips through them
- she can't even really remember who "solitaire" is
- which was just an identity she gave herself when she first broke away from the hive anyway
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:50 PM
- right
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:50 PM
- caramel is very sensitive, passive, and soft spoken
- hates confrontation
- he is the perfect punching bag for solitaire
- emotionally AND physically
- because she can get violent
- it's how she learned to survive, after all
- there's a scene where caramel goes home, solitaire goes on a diatribe against him because she had a shitty day at work
- solitaire shapeshifts into minuette and larps as a dentist since she's settled into ponyville
- i'm thinking of using "colgate" as her name
- to connect her to the fandom name
- and to distinguish her as a different pony
- just one that looks... weirdly identical to minuette
- might change the cutie marks too
- anyway, she shoves/hits caramel, which sets him off balance
- and he hits his head on the side of a table
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:55 PM
- oh dear
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:55 PM
- she leaves to go upstairs
- and caramel goes to the bathroom to clean and bandage his head
- upon doing so while looking in the mirror
- he can see for just a second
- a flicker
- of what he swears is his mother
- next day, back at the hospice
- Victory Rose, his new patient, is much more talkative this time
- she seems to have warmed a bit more
- caramel talks to her, and the more he does
- the more he learns
- and the happier she seems to become
- about halfway through he notices she now has a morphine drip
- which wasnt there yesterday
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:57 PM
- ah
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:58 PM
- he rides with this, and she tells him that she's been reading a great book recently
- "The Jarred Bell"
- she got it yesterday after he left
- and she says if he can get one from golden oaks
- he should
- HeartshineYesterday at 7:58 PM
- the jarred bell. XD
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 7:58 PM
- hey, if there's not a little bit of humor
- a story can be too bleak to get through
- on his way back home from the hospice
- he encounters pinkie pie
- he works at bon bon's sweetshop, which supplies sugarcube corner a lot, and sees pinkie often anyway for
- obvious reasons
- so of course, pinkie is his friend, but moreso than she's everypony's friend
- they talk, and she notices he has the jarred bell, which victory rose had given him
- since she said she'd read a good portion and needed some time to process it
- (plus being doped up made her more carefree and generous)
- pinkie notices the copy and recognizes it
- and after a moment tells caramel that she knows where she's seen it before
- that's Rarity's copy of the jarred bell
- and she opens the cover and notes rarity's signature in neat little script at the bottom of the title page
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:02 PM
- oh dear
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:02 PM
- caramel goes back home
- solitaire isn't there
- he sits down and starts to read the jarred bell
- now, this chapter covers rthe span of a few weeks
- and it is not told in order
- caramel increases his visits to the hospice
- learning more about who victory rose is and who she was before the cancer
- and he keeps trying to find rarity
- who refuses to talk to him
- and in fact
- seems to be avoiding him
- what's more unsettling about this ordeal to caramel personally is that
- well, he's no longer attracted to solitaire for obvious reasons
- and he never exactly
- fell out of love with roseluck
- he used solitaire as a distraction
- he meets with roseluck, and tells her about victory rose
- while, funnily enough
- they tend to a patch of victory roses
- roseluck suggest him something daisy told her
- that despite how painful, and how used to doing something you may be
- you have to cut it out before it destroys what you love
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:05 PM
- oh dear
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:05 PM
- she makes this emphasis by cutting off a dying bit of one of the roses
- to clarify
- caramel has been muddling the description of his time with victory rose
- with his time with solitaire
- and it's not subtle
- especially not to roseluck
- one of his closest friends
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:06 PM
- of course not, yeah she'd see that
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:06 PM
- and the whole town... kinda knows about it
- it's a small town
- also thunderlane sucks and cant keep his mouth shut
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:07 PM
- poor Thunderlane
- so abused
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:09 PM
- oh yeah
- if you'd like, when it's not so late at night
- i can give you the brand new/thunderlane story
- that's one of my proudest works
- but yes
- atrophy ends
- with caramel going home
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:10 PM
- oh sure!
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:10 PM
- his head swirling with thoughts of solitaire, rarity, bon bon, roseluck, daisy
- his mother
- everypony
- stares up directly into the chandelier
- and it begins to spin
- faster and faster
- more and more dizzying
- and he lapses into a dream
- and Bear begins
- in this dream
- solitaire is minuetter
- but she's a bear/pony hybrid
- at least her top half his
- her lover half is some crab/beetle thing
- and where her middle is supposed to be
- is a giant, gaping jaw, filled with sharp, mishappen teeth
- clacking mandable
- and really it doesn't look like a mouth beyond the jaw aspect
- it looks like a vagina
- the creature crawls over to him and mounts him
- lowering her head down to babble a mixture of berating and idolizing compliments
- teeth digging into his thighs and stomach
- feeling like he might get sucked up inside her
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:13 PM
- winces
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:13 PM
- and then she releases him
- picks him up in her hoof/claws
- and takes him to a bizarre version of ponyville
- Big Mac, but she's a mare
- Thunderlane laughing and playing with Rumble and an older mare who looks very similar to them
- all the buildings are out of place
- twisting in and out of themselves
- if they need to be somewhere, they're there
- at this point, though
- even though maybe an hour or ttwo have passed according to caramel
- the solitaire-colgate creature has become
- very pregnant
- and before he knows it
- he's helping give birth to a mass of misshapen ponies, changelings, bears, and everywhere in between
- the jaws clenching down
- trying to break caramel's forelimbs
- trying to consume the children
- and most of them are dead or dying by the time that the creature finishes
- except one
- a perfect little bear cub
- no trace of insect or even pony
- the creature and caramel move out to the everfree
- they find a cave, and they live there
- and years go by
- the creature growing larger and more grotesque
- caramel more sickly and skeletal
- but the bear cub seems to be doing just fine
- until one day
- when caramel feels like he might be getting used to this life
- he sees that the cub has sprouted small
- but noticeable
- antlers
- and he brushes a hoof under his mane and feels the same on his head
- and he wakes up in the chair, the sun rising
- the sounds of solitaire clattering around upstairs echoing down to him
- more time passes
- a few weeks
- victory rose is definitely getting worse
- but she loves to see caramel
- and caramel loves to see her
- but he can't help but to think how guilty he is
- victory was not in that dream
- and the dream has been haunting him every night
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:20 PM
- oh dear
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:20 PM
- not that it keeps replaying
- it only happened once
- but it echoes through his mind as he tries to sleep
- and sleep is a void
- he hears from blossomforth, a member of the celestia's light cult which has been around for roughly 1000 years
- standin for christianity
- specifically new american breeds
- to try praying to luna to see if she'll help
- he groans, foregoes this, and asks twilight to directly speak to luna
- while he's there he asks about why rarity is avoiding him
- and twilight is oddly silent
- fast forward again
- roseluck and daisy are getting married
- i mistakenly said early she was in a relationship with lily
- lily is the stepsister of daisy, who is in a relationship with roseluck
- checkin my notes
- at the wedding, caramel has
- mixed feelings
- he's happy roseluck is happy
- and he's mostly resigned himself to the fact he'll never be with her
- but still
- he's definitely in pain
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:24 PM
- supportive of best friend, avoiding Chasing Amy situations, yeah that's fair
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:25 PM
- we're in 13 now btw, don't remember if i mentioned
- but the wedding goes well
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:25 PM
- I've been kinda following by theme, tbh
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:25 PM
- caramel quells his urges to ruin the thing by declaring his love in an incredibly cringy public display
- awesome! glad it works so well
- and right as the
- whatever is the party after the official ceremony is called
- blanking rn
- during that, he notices derpy approaching
- but she's wearing her uniform
- it's not like she wasnt invited, but since it IS a saturday (or pony equivilent)
- she technically still has to be on the job
- and derpy is good like that
- she stays on it
- she comes by the wedding with a lot of mail for roseluck and daisy
- mostly wedding presents
- and then gives Thunderlane a letter too
- thunderlane opens it
- blah sorry
- i am drunk
- caramel!
- caramel, not thunderlane
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:28 PM
- oh no you're fine
- I like listening!
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:28 PM
- anyway caramel opens the letter and it's written on hospice stationary
- on one side
- in shaky, penmenship
- is "thank you - VR"
- and on the other
- in ornate, flowery, delicate writing
- is "thank you - WP"
- caramel feels a sinking pit in his stomach
- and he dashes from the wedding instantly to the hospice
- and Two begins
- the majority of two is focused around Victory Rose's final 24 hours
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:30 PM
- WP?
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:30 PM
- deep lore about her parents and childhood
- well, no point in hiding spoilers i suppose
- since none of this gets resolved in hospice
- and is related more to other stories that interweve with The Antlers series
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:30 PM
- ah, okay
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:30 PM
- WP stands for White Pony
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:31 PM
- oh!
- okay
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:31 PM
- which is Rarity's covername in a VFD/SCP hybrid secret society i made up for this verse
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:31 PM
- oh
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:31 PM
- Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops belongs to it
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:31 PM
- *oh*
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:31 PM
- Victory Rose was Rarity's field partner
- god damn i love thomas pynchon
- neither scp or series of unfortunate events would exist without him
- i need to read more of him
- crying of lot 49 ;~;
- anyway, victory rose babbles a lot in her final hours to caramel about the things she saw
- and the things she did
- but she never once brings up rarity
- she's loyal to the end
- Caramel is kind of connecting dots
- and of course
- rarity wrote to him
- of her own volition
- caramel confirms this by comparing the signature inside the jarred bell to the thank you letter
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:34 PM
- right
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:35 PM
- victory rose dies holding caramel's hoof
- and caramel holds on to it for a moment
- before letting it slip away
- and he slumps down on a chair on the other side of the room
- and lapses into a similar dream state he did with the chandelier
- he's in a hospital bed
- but he's victory rose
- and he realizes
- victory rose was in the dream
- with the creature
- and it had been him
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:37 PM
- oh
- ;-;
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:37 PM
- there's a point to have caramel never see his reflection in "Bear"
- or how he occassionally has wings
- and then doesnt
- and why he becomes
- more and more sickly
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:38 PM
- right
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:38 PM
- the doctors in the hospice come in
- all ones he knows well
- he's been volunteering for a long time
- and they starts cutting into him
- peeling off his skin like latex
- and beneath it is a changeling
- solitaire
- caramel goes into full on panic attack
- and tries to break free of the cot restraints
- and can't
- tries to change
- and cant
- Colgate walks into the room
- and drops a golden ring on his chitinous underbelly
- my headcanon is unicorns have rings for their horns
- for marriage
- other ponies use fetlock cuffs or wear the ring around their neck
- on a chain or something
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:41 PM
- right
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:41 PM
- so she leaves
- and victory rose comes in
- and leans down to kiss him
- and she does, and it feels great
- and he feels himself coursing with love
- feeding on it
- growing stronger, growing more powerful
- maybe those restraints aren't so difficult after all
- maybe he can change
- flickers with a green glow
- and opens his eyes
- flooded with euphoria
- and the kiss breaks
- as it does
- the mask of victory's face sloughs off
- half ceramic, half melting flesh
- and beneath it is Roseluck's
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:42 PM
- ;-;
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:43 PM
- and caramel is overcome with the sudden flood of why he goes to the hospice
- and what he does
- and what he is
- arching his back against the restraints
- he tries to break free once more
- and to change
- and in a burst of green light
- he becomes a stag
- and sees as a mare
- whose face is rapidly oscillating between roseluck and his mother's
- comes closer and closer to him
- lips formed in a ring, ready to kiss
- he charges out the window
- four stories up, mind you
- and lands antlers first onto the cobblestone outside the building
- he wakes up on the edge of the everfree
- his head pounding and some dirt and scratches in his coat
- but otherwise fine
- he heads back home
- Wake begins
- he returns to the hospice
- and they stop him
- he's not allowed back
- something to do with "personal attachment to the last patient"
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:47 PM
- :<
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:47 PM
- he spends a lot of time wandering around ponyville in a haze
- a stupor
- he's not a drinking like mac or thunderlane though
- or even roseluck
- he just wanders around, sleeps outside for a few weeks
- and when he comes home
- he finds a note from solitaire
- she's left
- it's full of insults and the like
- about how caramel was weak
- would rather fuck some lesbian or cancer patient
- (solitaire was always angry whenever caramel hung out with anyone but her, but victory rose got her especially)
- caramel mopes around his house (and this is HIS house, solitaire moved into his house he inherited from his mother when she disappeared)
- there are visitors
- pinkie
- bon bon
- big mac
- thunderlane
- applejack (caramel is close to the whole apple family in ponyville in general)
- but he just feels
- empty
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:50 PM
- understandably
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:50 PM
- nothing can really make this better
- one night
- roseluck shows up
- she is very drunk
- and she collapses on caramel's couch
- caramel listens to her sob about current relationship issues she's having with daisy
- acts as her shoulder
- and the whole time
- he can feel that same warm feeling from that dream
- like he's feeding off of what she's saying
- roseluck turns to caramel
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:52 PM
- oh dear
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:52 PM
- tears in her eyes
- and says "you know, caramel, if I wasn't a lesbian, I would be with you in a heartbeat. I love you."
- and caramel bites back a sob, gets off the couch
- gets her a glass of water and a blanket
- and goes back to his room
- a few days later
- caramel finishes the jarred bell
- and starts cleaning up his house
- which is a mess
- and full of reminders of solitaire
- he plans to burn those
- while he's cleaning, he hears a knock
- and it's rarity
- she asks to come inside
- caramel lets her
- rarity asks him how he liked the jarred bell
- caramel said he enjoyed it
- "the end was a bit optimistic"
- rarity laughs softly
- silence for a second
- and then rarity basically does the whole "don't ever let anyone tell you you deserve that" bit
- and caramel is a bit shocked
- because more intimate details about what solitaire would do to him
- especially sexual ones
- he reserved for victory
- who had then told rarity
- caramel is furious
- but then realizes
- victory is dead
- rarity is the only other pony who
- actually knows the extent of what solitaire did to him
- "would you like to talk about it? on your terms?"
- caramel is quiet
- "yes"
- Epilogue begins
- HeartshineYesterday at 8:58 PM
- nods
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 8:58 PM
- who knows how long it's been since victory died and solitaire left
- caramel has been going to work again
- but he's quiet the whole time
- bon bon doesn'tprod
- pinkie tried cheering him up but stopped out of respect the sixth or seventh time
- roseluck and caramel have been hanging out a lot
- and by that, more than he hangs out with anypony else
- which is to say he goes to her flowerstand after work every day
- says hello
- has small talk
- buys a rose
- a victory rose
- and goes home
- every night he is plagued by dreams
- luna never got back to twilight
- when caramel asks about it one day, Twilight seems concerned and... redactive
- about what she's saying
- caramel gives up
- HeartshineYesterday at 9:01 PM
- right, as you kinda do when you're... drained
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 9:02 PM
- yeah
- resigns himself to the sleepless night
- most of the dreams are just about victory dying
- or the creature doing something awful to him
- or the bear cub crying out for attention
- and caramel recoiling from its antlers
- caramel does have two constant visitors during this entire time
- big mac
- and thunderlane
- they come for a couple hours, bring him stuff
- talk to him
- try to cheer him up
- thunderlane showing up drunk more often than not but
- it's the thought that counts
- HeartshineYesterday at 9:03 PM
- nods
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 9:03 PM
- and caramel wishes that could be enough
- and sometimes
- he feels it might be
- after they both come over one night
- they have a couple of drinks
- caramel, usually never drinking, has exactly one sweet apple acres hard cider
- has a great night
- everything feels amazing, light, fluffy
- bubbly
- the alcohol starts to make him sleepy
- he collapses into bed, drifting off
- into a hazy, warm void...
- suddenly he feels a hoof against him
- something in the bed shift
- his eyes open
- staring back at him, the faces mixed so much he can only say it was all of them
- are roseluck, victory, and his mother
- she presses her face up against his
- and it changes to solitaires'
- mandibles clacking
- caramel scrambles from the bed, and flings himself against his windowsill
- thrusts it open
- when he was a foal, after his mother left
- he had spent a night up on the roof
- staring up at the sky
- gazing deep into the stars
- just hoping to be lost in it all
- but as he gets to the windowsill he didnt exactly
- account for how much time he'd lost track of
- and everything is snow and icy
- as he tries to go from his window to the roof, which is about six feet away from said window
- he slips
- hits his head off the gutter
- and falls to the ground
- but as he does, he can feel everything spinning
- just like it did with the chandelier
- and victory's death
- everything slows down as he plummets towards the ground
- and he realizes that maybe
- this isn't so bad after all
- light shining down from the moon between gently falling snowflakes
- HeartshineYesterday at 9:09 PM
- :<
- Numb To NothingYesterday at 9:09 PM
- a pegasus hovers over him
- victory rose
- and he smiles
- closes his eyes
- and he feels somepony's hooves grasping him
- and blacks out
- le fin
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