Layers of White - Mend / Tear

Layers of white 3 "Mend / Tear"

Italics for extended vowels? Or just adding the extra vowels, regardless that it looks a little stupid.
MG = Moth Girl. (Masiro)
SM = Salaryman. (Syûhei)
I forgot their names. In an ironic twist, their first initials match my prov. names.

MG's Narration

[Today's the day before a holiday, and a long one at that~]

[Thus they said that they'd quickly come home.]

[/They/ had told me that we'd go out together somewhere over this long holiday.
But really, I'd be satisfied with just their company alone...]

[But I'm happy
Ufufu
Ah geez
I can't wait. ]

"Ok!"

Pg2

MG "Tonight's the night that I'll master this for sure!"

SM "This is bad..."

"This is super bad..."

"Work held me back way longer than I had expected..."

Pg3

SM "Is she mad I wonder~...
She's definitely mad...

I said I was going to come back early and everything..."

"I...
I'm home~"

MG "Welcome home~..."

SM "SHE'S SUPER DEPRESSED..."

"Woah! Dinner looks tasty!"

MG "It'd be tastier if it were still hot though..."

SM "OF COURSE IT WOULD!!"

"So... Sorry...!
I'll totally make it up to you, ok?!"

PG4

MG "Well then, I would like you to comfort me now and on through the night~"

SM "Eh?"

"It's already pretty late you know, and tomorrow is a holiday anyways, so let's start then..."

MG "Nope~"

SM "The holiday..."

MG "No~"

SM "But"

MG "Its fine, so why don't we go to bed together?"

SM "Yes."

PG5

MG "I've been waiting for this you know~?"

"Hey hey
You were the same right dear?~"

SM "Ye... Yeah."

MG "ehehe~
Aaall this time I've been waiting, you know?"

SM "hey... But..."

MG "Let's play together to the fuuullest~."

"Geez, why is it small~?"

SM "Sorry, I'm tired..."

[萎っ = Wilting]

PG6

MG "Well, there's no helping it~
I'll quickly make it haaard for you now~"

SM "Wai...
So intensely..."

Pg7

MG "But look~
It's twitching so much~!
Now it's a penis that looks like it's feeling good.
It's pulsing now too~?"

"Harden~
harden~ up
I want you to feel more and more pleasure."

"Ehehe~"

"Hey~...
Do you want to ejaculate~?"

"Your cock's been wanting to shoot aaaall it's stuff for a while right? You want to let it all out inside my mouth don't you~?"

PG8

MG "Ei!"

SM "Ua~"

"Wha..."

MG "Well no way,
Every drop of it must be spurted inside
Me~"

PG9

"Finally~... Ah"

"I've been waiting and waiting for thiiis...
Aah..."

"I... LOVE YOU DEAR~!"
[or "DEAR... I LOVE YOUU!"]

Pg10

[SEX SOUNDS INTENSIFY IN THE BACKGROUND]

"Your penis is grinding so deep~
You'll make me cum~..."

Pg11

"Woo want to cum~...?" Nyou, oo, hyou, hoo, something like that.

"Ufufu
Goho ahead~!"

"Spurt lots and lots and lots and lots
INSIDE ME!"

Pg12

[Just sex sounds]

Pg13

"Nfufu
Cleaning it~ up... ["got to clean it up"?]
Ahhaa [could be a slurred "anata"?]
I looooove you..."

"Ehehe
My dear's juices belong aaaall~ to me~"

"So, so~,
We're going to keep on going, and going, and I'll keep squeezing everything out of you
'TIL MORNING~"
[could cut the extra "and going,"]

SM: "Any...
Any breaks?"

MG "Not one~"

SM "Eh..."

PG14

The kanji "綻" is read either as Dan, Ten or Hokoro, as Hokoro bi, or bu, it means to rip, tear or to be frayed around the edges.
I'm not sure where he's going with this kanji. Maybe he's just using it as a "AND THEN" interstitial.
Anyways. Next page.

It's an interstitial between the A part and the B part, hence the double subtitle.

For this, after careful googling, I've decided that you should just write "Tear" beside the kanji or at least near by, in a nice font.

Pg15

SM "Thanks for the meal!"

"Today's meal was delicious too"

"Thanks Mashiro."
[Is her name Mashiro? I assume so?
Mashiro is her name]

MG "Yeah..."

SM "I adore my Mashiro's cooking, you know"

MG "Liar..."

SM "Huh?"

Mg "It's just, recently you've been coming home later"

"And you've been saying that you don't need dinner more often..."

"And you've been leaving so early that I can't give you a goodbye kiss..."

"And since you've been so tired, you've been saying no to having sex..."

"Been saying no to having sex with me..."

"What if..."

PG16

"What If you were cheating on me, I wonder what I would do...
...Say?"
[as in: attempted murder, say?
Does that work?"]

SM "...
I'm not cheating, but
Say if I were cheating, what would you do?"

MG "Are you?"

SM "I'm not cheating on you."

MG "That's a relief~
Ufufu..."

SM "...Seriously."

"As If I'd do something like cheat on you, right?"

MG "but..."

SM "The...
The person I love..."

"Is... Is you, and only you."

MG "ah..."

Pg17

"Dear~"

"That means!
That means!"

 "We'll have sex for sure~?"

Sm "You really like it huh?
Lewd stuff..."

"Well, I was going to ask if you wanted to do it today anyways..."

Pg18

MG "aha–"
"Is this to your liking?"

"For my dear's sake, I prepared this erotic lingerie~"

"So, will this get you in the mood I wond...
...er?"

SM "So I can get into that kind of mood, right?"

MG: "A–...
Wa–...
...yeah."

Pg19

"Eh
So suddenly...?"

Sm "should I stop?"

Mg "No"

"I'm just...
Happy... Oh"

Pg20

"If you keep hitting me so deeply...!!"
[if you keep hitting my cervix is another option, but she used Oku, or deep. It can also mean an interior area. Cervix could be a reasonable choice. Earlier, during the first sex scene, you could say he was grinding her cervix. If you change the translation here, you should do so back there, unless you want to hedge your bets.]

"I'll cum!
You'll make me cum!"

"Not so!
Intense!"

Pg21

"Dear..."

"Cum for me~"

"You're shooting it
inside! Ah–"

"I'm also cu-ah!"

"No~
Ah..."

"Cu-ah, Cumming!"

Pg22

[SEX SOUNDS]

pg23

"Fufu"

"Today was reeeeally good~ dear~"
"Since I'm always giving you my love,
To receive my Dear's love this time, makes me very, very happy~..."
"Haan,
I love you~"

"Hey, dear...
The next time I wear lewd underwear like I did today..."

Pg24

"Make love to me in the same way all night!"

Sm "Eh."

"Ah...
Ah..."

"Ah—"

"Ah—
For... For sure..."

"Next time...
Yeah...?"

Mg "Yeah!
It's a promise!"

Pg25

Another interstitial, this time a similar kanji. Tsukuro u in this case
And it means to mend, to fix, to darn, or to patch up.

Just have a nice script beside it saying "Mend"

ATOGAKI

HERO
NAME : Okûchi Syûhei
HEIGHT 175cm WEIGHT 70kg
Totally ordinary male. He's an SE*.
He's a bit haggard after being wrung dry by his wife every night.

HEROINE
NAME : Okûchi Masiro
HEIGHT 170cm WEIGHT 60kg
LIKES : Her husband, sewing, and her husband.
DISLIKES : Things that get in between her and her husband, getting tired modifying heavy work clothes**.
Even though she looks silkwormish, she isn't actually related to them. In the first place, only her husband can actually apprehend her true form. Whilst it's not like she can't eat per se, she doesn't really like to, nor is it necessary, so usually she just drinks mulberry tea***.
She isn't really able to taste her own cooking, so she usually cooks by more-or-less following recipes precisely.
But, on weekends, she goes out shopping with her husband, and comes back with heavy bags loaded with ingredients; and when it comes time to cook, she always makes sure to give taste tests, working hard to match her husband's tastes.
She's been using a sowing machine to sow, after receiving one as a hand-me-down from a neighbour****.
She usually watches TV. She buys a lot of stuff over the Internet too.

AUTHOR STATEMENT

Thank you very much for choosing this work, I'm SolopipB.
Occasionally I think about giving post-script writing a go.
I wonder what the newcomers must be thinking.

I wanted to write about the story's setting since I was going to lose the opportunity otherwise, as I was running out of pages, so I briefly wrote about it on an Omake page.
Really, it was meant to be in the manga, but since "Spinning" was delayed until summer, I wouldn't be able to mention it, so it was placed here incidentally, yeah.
Apart from the setting itself, the subtitle's kanji indicates a different story route to that of "Koromohen" (TLN: Layers of White 1 in all likelihood) and "Itohen" (TLN: likewise, Layers of White 2).
Koromohen's bed, and Itohen's happiness, are both single scenarios in that branch, but, this manga is amusing in its own way isn't it?
Let's go in a more visual novel kind of direction.
I'd really like to have the opportunity to write more about this branch's Masiro and Syûhei's past some day. (I wish.)

It'd be best if I could just complete all of my work now, but since my pen has been slowing down, I haven't got the end finished...
Sorry, seriously...
If I think about this story's flirty, lovey-dovey world, I feel that I could write any number of stories,
Like what would happen after their child was born, that kind of story...
I've even fantasised about character designs and plot lines.
But if I do a sloppy job drawing the mantis and bee stories, I'll get in trouble...
...I'll have to do it after I finish the next two Shiragasane works.
I hope that we can continue our relationship through to my future works "Tsumugi" and "Tsudzure"!
[Thread] and [Tapestry]


TLNs
*I have no idea what this means.
Systems Engineer?
Self Employed?
Singing Entertainer?

**I have no idea if this correct or not.

***I think?

****or she gave away the machine. Who knows. I'm pretty sure I got it right the first time here.