xDraghun

M4gicBanana Plot Review

Jul 17th, 2015
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  1. Hello M4gicBanana!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off by talking about your structure.
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  5. You structure has some pretty decent depth and detailing but i think it could be worked on. Try using stairs/slabs and fences/walls to your structure to enhance the detail aspect. Your roof is ok but the spruce wood and the buttons that you used doesn't give a settle feeling. Next time, try to make the roof overhang the side of the building.
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  7. Your trees are pretty nice and I love how they're custom made. The glowstone/slabs are a weird and u should remove them in place of apples. Get an apple by getting a steve head in your creative inv and type ./skull MHF_Apple. You should also try adding branches and roots to your tree because they add a more realistic feel to them.
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  9. For your terrain, I love how you added these small hills and the pond that streams down from the side of one. The area around the pond is also pretty nice and detailed. I suggest for the bottom of the pond, you use sand/sandstone to add color and detail. U can never have too much detail xD. You have used a variety of blocks for the landscape, and it does look better than regular grass, but the placement is a little weird. Also, this huge boulder looks like WE gone wrong xD. Try to make it more realistic by add vines, mossy cobble, or cobblestone.
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  11. I have concluded that your have put a lot of effort into your plot and that you deserve to be ranked up. Great Job and to start your novice plot do ./warp novice and ./plot auto. I hope to see your builds in the future! :D
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