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  1. Definitely agree with Christoper, you should have the flower be the ending view. On the title page, I would also recommend removing the picture of the flowers, it was a little distracting for me.
  2. As far as the definition goes, maybe I'm just not getting it, but why are there flowers? Maybe try making that connection a little more clear.
  3. Also you could throw in some funny examples from history, I'm sure you can find some on the wiki for the word. Good job!
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