Hypnosis RP 4 (in progress)

Boa Hancock was taking a stroll around the jungle. The beautiful Snake Princess was dressed in a kimono that was left open down to her waist, and showed some leg. It was designed to emphasize her gorgeous figure, rather than hiding it.
A man walks up to her
"Excuse me Miss, I need your help for a few minutes"
"Yes?" she asked. "What is it?"
"Come in to the tent here and I'll explain what to do"
Boa walked into the tent, unsuspecting.
"Just sit down on the couch here. Once you do that, I'll explain what to do"
Boa sat down on the couch. Being a queen, she wasn't used to being told what to do; but the man had asked for her help. She decided to wait for exactly what it was he wanted first.
"I need you to look at something for a few minutes. It won't take very long"
Boa waited until...
I pull out a pocket watch
"I just need you to relax for a few minutes and stare at this"
Boa chuckled. "An amateur hypnotist? Do you work for a carnival or something? All right, then, I'll watch; I could use some entertainment."  She watched the watch...
I start swinging the watch in front of you
Okay Miss Hancock, I just need you to follow the watch as it swings.
Boa's eyes followed the watch, moving back and forth with it.
That's it, just let your eyes follow it and relax.
Boa relaxed. She felt so calm, she didn't even care that the watch was gone and that there was only a steadily flashing light...
Do you notice how the watch sparkles as it swings?
"Yes...so pretty..." she murmured.
It's like you don't want to take your eyes off of it
"No..." she replied softly.
"Nothing else matters now"
"Nothing else matters now..."
"No other thoughts in your head"
"No other thoughts in my head..."
"Not a care in the world"
"Not a care in the world..."
"Only the watch and my voice"
"Only the watch and your voice..."
"You can't fight it. You can't resist."
"I can't fight it...I can't resist..."
"Let everything go. No need to even think"
"...no need to think..." Boa parroted.
"You want to obey. You will obey. You must obey"
"...want to obey...must obey..." she repeated.
How do you feel now, Miss Hancock?
"Very good...relaxed..."
You're beginning to feel sleepy aren't you?
"...yes..."
Your eyelids are growing heavy aren't they?
"...yes..." Boa's eyes were fluttering as she spoke.
Let out a nice soft yawn for me.
Boa yawned sleepily. She was drifting off to sleep.
You're starting to become hypnotized aren't you, my dear?
"...yes..."
Very good. Now keep following the watch my dear.
Boa obeyed mindlessly, her eyes and head slowly following the watch's movements.
If you listen closely you can hear the watch ticking. Can you hear it?
"...tick...tick...tick..." she said in response.
Keep going Miss Hancock.
"...tick...(yawn)...t-tock...zzz..."
You can slowly feel yourself becoming dumber with each swing of the watch.
"...zzz...duhhh...zzz...duhhh..."
"Dumber, dumber"
"Dumber...(yawn)...dumber...(giggle)..."
That's right Miss Hancock, keep repeating that as you keep following the watch.
"Dumber...dumber...duhhhhh..." she finally said, drooling idiotically.
Perfect Miss Hancock, now you're as dumb as you want to be.
"(giggle) Why, thank you, master," she said in a bimbo-type voice.
It's so relaxing after a long stressful day isn't it?
"Mm-hmm!" she agreed.
It feels good to let yourself become dumb and sleepy doesn't it?
"Uh-huh."
Speaking of which you're feeling so sleepy now aren't you?
"Yeah..." Boa's eyes began to close, her head drooping.
Your eyelids are so heavy, it's getting hard to keep them open. But you can't close them just yet.
Boa's eyes stopped closing halfway.
You love being hypnotized don't you?
"Mm-hmm," she responded, nodding in agreement.
To let your mind slowly start to slip away.
"Mmm...hmmm..."
To allow yourself to slowly become sleepy.
"Mmm...hmmm..." Boa's eyes were starting to close again.
To allow your eyelids to slowly become heavy.
"(yawn)...Mmm...hmmm..." Boa's eyelids fluttered with the strain of staying open.
Allowing yourself to become dumb and obedient.
"...(giggle) dumb and obedient, okay, master (giggle)..."
"Sleepier and sleepier"
"Sleepier...and...sleepier..."
"Eyelids getting heavier and heavier"
"Heavier...and heavier...aaaaand...heeeaaaviiieeer..."
"Falling deeper and deeper"
"...deeper...and...deeper..."
"Becoming deeply hypnotized"
"Deeply...hypnotized..." Boa found just enough strength to keep her eyes open, just enough to follow the watch.
When I tell you to do so, I want you to slowly start counting down from 10 to 0.
"...(giggle) okay..." Boa giggled bimboishly.
When you reach zero you will close your eyes and fall under my spell, do you understand?
"Yes," she replied.
Very good now slowly start counting down for me.
"Ten...(giggle)...nine...(yawn)...eight..."
Keep going. Don't stop.
"...seven...sssiixxx..." Her eyelids were slowly sliding shut, and her head began to droop.
Halfway there. Don't stop counting yet. And keep following the watch.
Boa did her best to keep following the watch. "...five...f-four...thhhreee...t...t-twooooo...onnnnnnnnnezzzzz..." Her eyes slid completely shut and she fell asleep.
That's it, Miss Hancock. Just close your tired, heavy, drowsy, sleepy eyes now and let yourself fall under my spell.
"...yesssszzzzz..."
Can you hear me Miss Hancock?
"...yes..."
How do you feel?
"...relaxed..."
Do you feel empty headed and obedient?
"...yes..."
Do you feel dumb and sleepy?
"...tee-hee...uh-huh...yawwwnn..."
Repeat after me: "I am under your control".
"...I am under your control..."
"I want to do anything you tell me"
"...I want to do anything you tell me..."
"You are my master and I will obey"
"...You are my master...I will obey..."
Very good, Miss Hancock.
"Thank you..."
Such a good subject you are.
"Thank you," she repeated.
So submissive and so sexy.
"...yes..."
Now lay back for me. I'd like to do something nice for you.