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Mar 17th, 2015
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  1. Hey there!
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  3. While I can see you've changed your detail to be made from wooden slabs/stairs, you're still missing the point of subtle house detailing. And as well, you've still built one out from the wall, leaving a gap! I'm not too sure why you've done this, but I don't think it really works.
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  5. Read back through your reviews thoroughly and really change the things we've suggested.
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  7. In saying all this, I like the other changes you've made to the bridge/trees/terrain - it's just the structure holding you back.
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  9. Good luck!
  10. - Dutty :3
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