This is a really good first draft!  A few things I noticed...you give a lot of good information about the word panacea, but you don't present it in a very engaging way.  It's just one definition/context/etc after another, no great transitions.  I noticed at the very end you have the big thought bubble coming from the picture of the man, but you didn't set a path to it to pause on that big image (make sense?).  Add one more path before you zoom back into the "panacea" at the end.  Great work!