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- Novice Review:
- Really cool concept but theres a few things to work on before you rank up :)
- The trees are nice but you might want to smooth the trunks so they arent so rough looking. The structures are okay but they dont have a lot of depth/layers to them (theyre kinda flat) and also detailing is very important too.
- The smaller house is cute, but it doesnt go with the rest of the theme so try and make it more themed :) Adding more structures isnt a bad idea either btw :3
- The terrain is okay, but i really like the jujub on the plot, so maybe you can add more and work some terrain around them! IDK!
- Good luck with your plot :)
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