"I can't tell you how I got here or really when this all started but I can say this place has changed so much from when I first awoke."

Fixed:

"I can't tell you how I got here or when this all started, but what I can say is that this place has changed so much from when I first awoke."

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"All I remember was opening my eyes and being suspended in air. Then the falling began. The sky was so blue and it felt as if I was falling forever."

Fixed:

"All I remember was opening my eyes and being suspended in air. Then the falling began. The sky was so blue; it felt as if I was falling forever." (The comment about the color of the sky is out of place, but that's as best as you can get with its trailing.)

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"I remember seeing the ground screaming towards me yet I wasn't afraid I was slightly welcoming it as if I knew it wasn't the end."

Fixed:

"I remember seeing the ground coming towards me, yet I wasn't afraid. I slightly welcomed it as if I knew it wasn't the end."

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"I guess I'm getting a little ahead of myself, my name is Roland but I usually go by Ron. See I'm what you would call a "block" though I myself am not fully sure what so special about it Marcus on the other hand was extremely excited to see me moving around."

Fixed:

"I guess I'm getting a little ahead of myself. My name is Roland, but I usually go by Ron. See, I'm what you would call a "block," though I'm not fully sure what's so special about it. Marcus, on the other hand, was extremely excited to see me moving around."

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"I guess because I brought him up I should explain who Marcus is. Marcus is a mouse cursor or so he says some of the others here refer to him as "The Creator". In my opinion not all of them have their elevator go to the top floor some not even half way up."

Fixed:
"I guess, because I brought him up, I should explain who Marcus is. Marcus is a mouse cursor (or so he says). Some of the others here refer to him as "the Creator." In my opinion not all of their elevators reach the top floor."

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"There are quite a few other but I'll get we'll meet them later on."

Fixed:
"There are quite a few others, but I'll get to them later on."

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"For now the story should tell it self."

Fixed:
"For now, the story should tell itself."

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"So let's start near the beginning right after the fall."

Fixed:
"So let's start near the beginning. Right after the fall..."