ZonayPvp Plot Review

Hello ZonayPvp!!!

I'm xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets first start of by talking about your structures.

I like how your made more than one structure, and its highly accounted for. Your houses are pretty nice but they need some work done. They need more detail and depth added on to them. Depth is basically the layering of different blocks to add more detail to the walls of your structures. Try using any wood slab/stair, walls/fences, windows, etc to add more detail and depth to your walls. You can refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help. I really like your roofs and they're pretty decent for an initiate plot.

Next are your organics, and you dont have any. Organics are things such as flowers, trees, statues (excluding player statues), animals, etc. Most commonly initiates build trees for their starting plot so i recommend that. When building your trees, add roots, branches, and air holes to make it seem more lively and realistic. You can even take the extra step of getting a steve head from the creative inv and doing /skull MHF_Apple to add apples to your trees.

The terrain that you have on your plot rn is basically one mountain and a flat cobblestone ground. You need to work on smoothing down your mountain some more. I like how you used cobblestone to layer the mountain, but you could use more blocks than that for variation (same for your ground). Try experimenting with green clay, cobblestone, dirt, gravel, any block that matches your palette. If you want, you could add a waterfall that streams to a pond. If u make a pond, make sure it looks nice. You could add sugar cane growing from the sides, lilypads, glowstone, etc. I suggest that you also make more than one mountain, but it could be hard based on the amount of structures you have built.

I have decided that your plot still needs some work and I'm hoping your listen to my suggestions. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission. :D