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  1. >RV
  2. Nice robin hood but the hands are too big
  3.  
  4. >Bat tank
  5. Is this even 30 minutes?
  6.  
  7. >Kanye
  8. Your pen is bleeding too much, use faster stroke
  9.  
  10. >Tetris Skirt
  11. Your colours are desaturated and your values lack contrast, be more bold
  12.  
  13. >Birdthing
  14. He is jumping downwardly, choose a ground plane
  15.  
  16. >undateables
  17. The shading on the gecko is too scratchy, it breaks the form
  18.  
  19. >Seelow
  20. cute fishes
  21.  
  22. >Willnot
  23. is this even 30 minutes?
  24.  
  25. >Graph
  26. Nice rocks but that one looks like a penis
  27.  
  28. >Memes
  29. Is this black and white chormatic aberration wtf
  30.  
  31. >tomato puree
  32. The texture does no tessellate
  33.  
  34. >nignog
  35. nice lines, they look like they were done on pen and paper
  36.  
  37. >dickhead
  38. you're drawing too small
  39.  
  40. >Cooker
  41. Nice colours but the messy paint texture makes the skin look sit
  42.  
  43. >putin
  44. Nice cherry faget
  45.  
  46. >chingchongchang
  47. >taking a photo of a computer screen
  48.  
  49. >porn
  50. Good lines
  51.  
  52. >Rog
  53. The gold looks like plastic, add more hue shit
  54.  
  55. >/d/
  56. Lines are bad, look into line weight variation
  57.  
  58. >Vuster
  59. nice facial expression but the lines are too messy
  60.  
  61. >File
  62. poor edge control
  63.  
  64. >Finland
  65. image quality is fucked man
  66.  
  67. >lolibuns
  68. nice rendering but perspective is fucked
  69.  
  70. >you irl
  71. don't colorpick
  72.  
  73. >bigramen
  74. this is a waste of time you retard
  75.  
  76. >Jeremy
  77. nice rendering but it's more artsy fartsy than artistic
  78.  
  79. >several kelvin
  80. shading is too messy
  81.  
  82. >feminine shit
  83. design is shit, so is the linework
  84.  
  85. >gambling retard
  86. >colours are too saturated on the moss and values are too shallow
  87.  
  88. >virgin
  89. poor edge control, otherwise nice values
  90.  
  91. >mcdonalds burgers
  92. waste of time
  93. nice apple shapes
  94.  
  95. >Shron
  96. poor values on book and poor edge control
  97.  
  98. >Mr cool
  99. is this even 30 minutes?
  100.  
  101. >A Ren
  102. Nice values
  103. hail satan
  104.  
  105. >s-stutter
  106. nice construction but poor torso anatomy
  107.  
  108. >Pluto
  109. the fuck man
  110.  
  111. >Nik
  112. lines too messy
  113.  
  114. >Dense ego
  115. is this even 30 minutes? still hot though
  116.  
  117. >asleep
  118. red thing stands out way too much, poor value composition
  119.  
  120. >50 pence and 1 penny
  121. learn to draw before you stylize
  122.  
  123. >do
  124. Nice apple but the white background is too bright
  125.  
  126. >all alone in the woods
  127. get better taste in porn
  128.  
  129. >wo
  130. this is hot, show poos please
  131.  
  132. >totally immoral
  133. Nice dinosaw but his leg lacks rythmn
  134.  
  135. >bent over
  136. study planes
  137.  
  138. >Sill
  139. is this even 30 minutes?
  140.  
  141. >Jellyboy
  142. Nice shading, keep it up son and I might just let you suck my dick tonight
  143.  
  144. >Idiot
  145. is this even 30 minutes?
  146.  
  147. >nemerry
  148. nice shapes but is this even 30 minutes?
  149.  
  150. >cafe
  151. what a shit pose
  152.  
  153. >Gentlemen
  154. looks like a stale potato chip
  155.  
  156. >torah
  157. draw more volumes and less contours
  158.  
  159. >yeah bare
  160. what the fuck
  161.  
  162. >croquette
  163. nice bums on those figures
  164.  
  165. >cry
  166. Nice designs but the heads look shit
  167.  
  168. >ngmi
  169. nice colours, weak shadows
  170.  
  171. >breemhead
  172. draw bigger or use less textured paper
  173.  
  174. >szzszsszsk
  175. don't blend so much, choose your shadow shapes
  176.  
  177. >maru
  178. is this even 30 minutes?
  179.  
  180. >Kivul
  181. Nice shapes and lines but shit facial expression
  182.  
  183. >GMI
  184. actually nevermind
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