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- Hello Pvp_Power_!!
- I bet you already know my name and the process so Ill just get to it.
- Your structure is a nice sized based on how you made your terrain but it could use detail and depth liek your last structure xD. Try using some stone/wood stairs/slabs to enhance it. Again, refer to /warp depthtutorial. For this plot, I would like to see another structure.
- You trees are nice and custom made +1. They could use some roots/branches next time you make a tree. The kind of trees you made go well with your plot, and you have made a good amount of them.
- Your terrain is really good. It looks nice and smooth and the waterfall goes perfectly with it. Your sand layer is better than your last plot and its nice and even. I like how you added a cave but it could use some smoothing.
- You cobblestone layer adds some nice detailing and depth to your terrain but i think you should add another one top above the bottom grass layer so its consistant through the whole plot.
- Overall, I think this plot shows improvement and is better than your last plot. Its really nice, but also needs some work. I think you're almost ready to be promoted but you need to show me more effort. Good Luck and I hope to see another Novice really soon! :D
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