Chika quote json Review

Intro1 (00_01)
"I’m Aoba Chika from one of the @Tokimine branch family villages."
--> change Tokimine to Tokime

Also I feel like the line about living in Kamihama should stay on screen for the next gesture too (so move down the lines after by one gesture).
And maybe split the "I had never planned on coming back… @but maybe this is fate." line into two gestures. ...Er idk how to explain this neatly but something like this:

autoTurnFirst": 4.4 = I’m Aoba Chika from one of the @Tokime branch family villages.
autoTurnFirst": 1.4 & 4.2 = Though I lived in Kamihama up until @about a year ago,
autoTurnFirst": 2.8 & 0.3 = I had never planned on coming back…
autoTurnFirst": 3.1 = but maybe this is fate.
autoTurnFirst": 5.8 = I wish I could go to St. Liliana Academy @like before.
autoTurnFirst": 4.0 = It’s a wonderful school @surrounded by nature.


Intro2 (00_02)
Before "I might as well live there!", there's a missing line from your Google Doc that says "I know them so well,". So I'd suggest putting the missing line at autoTurnFirst 3.1 and move the 'live there' line to autoTurnFirst 2.6


Unlock Magic 1 (00_16)
"I like to be self-sufficient, @but you still need money sometimes"
--> add a period at the end

"that’s why I work a part time job! @I’m a nature guide in the Hokuyo mountains!"
--> capitalize the t in that’s


Unlock Magic 3 (00_18)
"I want to be able to give back to nature"
--> add a period at the end

"for now being a nature guide is the best way…"
--> capitalize the f in for


Awaken 1 (00_20)
Add the textHome clear command at the end of this quote group, the subs didn't go away.


First Login (00_24)
"Then I’ll give you a massage"
--> add a period at the end


Login Evening (00_27)
I'd adjust which text goes to which gesture like so:
autoTurnFirst": 3.7 = Is it so late already?
autoTurnFirst": 6.4 = The mountains have a lot of tall trees,@so even if the sun has only gone down@a little, it will be difficult to see.
autoTurnFirst": 2.0 = Let's head home.


Login Other (00_29)
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Login AP (00_30)
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Login BP (00_31)
You forgot to add a sub for autoTurnFirst 4.1, it should say "Have you ever seen a real mirage?" according to your Google Doc.


Tap1 (00_33)
In the first sub, I'd split off the part about red berries to the next gesture (and move down the subs afterward down one gesture.
Like so:
autoTurnFirst": 3.0 = That plant is yew, right?
autoTurnFirst": 3.3 = The red berries it has are also very delicious.
autoTurnFirst": 2.1 = Oh, but please be careful,
autoTurnFirst": 2.6 = the seeds are poisonous.


Tap2 (00_34)
"I think it’s important to find a balance between the two."
--> add a line break somewhere in between (like maybe after "find")


Tap3 (00_35)
"Since the village didn’t have anyone my age in it, @I talked to kyuubey,"
--> remove "@I talked to kyuubey" here since you have that in the next sub (and capitalize the k in kyuubey there since it's a name).


Tap4 (00_36)
"The mugwurt there was one that I planted, @I just kind of shouted..."
--> I'd move this down one gesture (from autoTurnFirst 1.5 to 4.1).


Tap8 (00_40)
"Though I do feel she is dangerously naive…"
--> I think this sub should stay on screen for the autoTurnFirst 5.3 gesture too.

And I also think...
"That's why I am going to stick with her" should be combined with "until the end @and see it through." at autoTurnFirst 4.2 (but if you do that, you should probably put a line break after "her")


Tap9 (00_41)
I'd move down the second "Human eat...!" to the next gesture and move the other lines down one gesture like so:
autoTurnFirst": 3.9 = Human eat…!
autoTurnFirst": 5.5 = Human eat…!
autoTurnFirst": 2.4 = ...I thought if I imitated the forest spirits
autoTurnFirst": 7.0 = I could chase out the bad guys@who cut down the trees. (also this needed a line break, it gets hidden by a menu button)
autoTurnFirst": 2.5 = I don’t like them...


Battle St (00_42)
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Battle Vict1 (00_43)
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Battle Vict2 (00_44)
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