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- 15:38 StarMechV for starters I was thinking, since I made Jeanne more of a character now. I'm wondering where i'd introduce her
- 15:38 StarMechV I still assume Roz should have some time before that, building her to have her store and a bigger bond with her friends, but still, I wonder if I could introduce her a little earlier than i originally thought
- 15:41 Adri_66215 did you have anything in mind regarding that?
- 15:43 StarMechV well probably wonder if maybe introduce her before roz's second arc
- 15:43 StarMechV so when its time to venture into Roz's mind and soul is not just the likes of kalas and/or Xelha and/or others
- 15:44 StarMechV plus it's act as a great side-arc to for Jeanne herself. Specially when she has a mini-breakdown as the fact she had grew apart from roz for a while hits her
- 15:44 Adri_66215 ah
- 15:48 StarMechV also i iamgine a nice scene with JEanne thanking Kalas for being at Roz's side when she needed it
- 15:51 Adri_66215 aww
- 15:58 StarMechV while im still not sure if keep the amnesia first plot, I still think the journey into roz's heart idea is gonna happen
- 15:58 StarMechV so why not spruce it up a bit?
- 15:59 Adri_66215 yeah
- 15:59 Adri_66215 likes the idea
- 16:01 StarMechV another idea I had
- 16:01 Adri_66215 hm?
- 16:01 StarMechV I had an idea of giving Jeanne a super form like I did wth Roz
- 16:01 Adri_66215 ah
- 16:01 StarMechV well she has power over earth and nature, why not make the ower be able to bend into a big armor for her
- 16:02 Adri_66215 neat
- 16:03 Adri_66215 admittedly imagined nothing but leaves, but that's a bit risque
- 16:04 StarMechV tempting, but nah
- 16:04 StarMechV mostly cause I feel the theme of protection kidna suits her
- 16:04 StarMechV heck, thanks to you thinking of the nature powers I have the best name for it
- 16:05 StarMechV Jeanne Chroma - Mother Gaia Form
- 16:05 Adri_66215 yaay
- 16:07 StarMechV Also was trying to think of cool scenes/moments in general for her
- 16:08 StarMechV mabe too much KLK in a row helpsme trying to think of hype in general XD
- 16:08 Adri_66215 lol
- 16:10 StarMechV btw did you think of a name for the crazy king villain yet?
- 16:11 Adri_66215 I did
- 16:11 Adri_66215 mentioned it before
- 16:12 StarMechV i must have forgotten sorry
- 16:13 Adri_66215 it's okay
- 16:13 Adri_66215 Dalton, btw
- 16:13 Adri_66215 another Chrono Trigger shoutout
- 16:17 StarMechV why chrono trigger?
- 16:19 Adri_66215 because some of the people who made CT (and it's sequel) also made BK
- 16:20 StarMechV oh i see
- 16:20 Adri_66215 that's also how I came up with Nadia's name
- 16:21 Adri_66215 in the game she was otherwise just the Ice Queen/Xelha's mom
- 16:22 StarMechV ah
- 16:25 StarMechV damn i just had an idea for a great hype scene but i guess it'd be long
- 16:25 StarMechV and im too lazy to write it in paste
- 16:25 Adri_66215 what's that?
- 16:27 StarMechV i dunno wha you have in mind, but I'll assume a imaginary scenario: King Dalton taking over the castle, people trapped, Xelha captured, Kayal held down and somewhat wounded as he personally wants to deal the killing blow to the man that "ruined everything" to him (cause I iamgine Dalton is THAT petty)...
- 16:28 StarMechV he is about to strike, when suddenly....BIG STONE FIST SPROUTING FROM THE GROUND AND UPPERCUTS HIM!
- 16:28 Adri_66215 SHORYUKEN
- 16:29 StarMechV from the hole, Jeanne Rozalin and Kalas leaping out, having escaped their own capture
- 16:29 Adri_66215 big damn heroes they are
- 16:32 StarMechV Dalton: You miserable maggots!!! -Jeanne: you foul man. We won't let you get away with this. -Dalton: Annoying harlot...you won't deprive me of my deserved revenge...
- 16:33 StarMechV -Jeanne: *standing in front of everyone with a determined look* Hurtng everyone to get your way...you only desire to endulge yourself rather than protecting and nutring your people...I won't stay and let you hurt this beautiful world! But most of all...I'll gladly put myself at risk...If it means protecting the Man I have grown to Love!! We WILL stop you!!!
- 16:33 Adri_66215 likes this
- 16:35 StarMechV (as a small moment of levity) -Rozali: *behind her while still combat ready* Hehe, wow Mom, you really went all out on that. I guess you really wanted to sound badass in front of Mr. Kayal -Jeanne: *blushing going briefly back into shy woman mode* I-i w-wasn't really I...um just came out like that!
- 16:36 StarMechV Rozalin: *smirks* Nah, it's fine. That was so cool!
- 16:36 StarMechV just came to mind mind, that's all
- 16:38 Adri_66215 it's fine, I like the idea
- 16:38 Adri_66215 though I imagine Dalton might've taken over the castle for a long while before this
- 16:38 StarMechV I still assume the big final confrontation'd mostly be focused on kalas and xelha, but just thought i could give Jeanne a moment
- 16:38 StarMechV as I'd imagine her and Kayal growing close would be building and lead into this too
- 16:39 Adri_66215 yeah
- 16:39 Adri_66215 thinks all of them would have a part in this
- 16:39 StarMechV yes
- 16:40 StarMechV well roz a bit being on the back. while a big support, i don't feel it's much of a big emotional turnpoint for her character
- 16:40 StarMechV more like a solidification of it
- 16:40 Adri_66215 yeah
- 16:43 StarMechV i am curious if you'd still be suign stuff of your original Wiseman plot
- 16:43 Adri_66215 is, but is considering making some changes
- 16:43 StarMechV would it still involve summoning a big dragon? or you'd save that for wiseman
- 16:44 StarMechV cause I remembered another hype scene I once told you involving characters of mine as well
- 16:44 Adri_66215 I am keeping the dragon, yes
- 16:44 Adri_66215 but what scene?
- 16:46 StarMechV heaby weight battle
- 16:46 StarMechV dark dragon vs Giant Clank
- 16:46 Adri_66215 oh yeah
- 16:48 Adri_66215 has been thinking a little on the Wiseman plot itself, btw
- 16:48 StarMechV hm?
- 16:48 Adri_66215 it's mostly in regards to the Dark Brethren
- 16:48 StarMechV do tell
- 16:49 Adri_66215 I know the initial idea was to have a sort of team-up, but Wiseman and the Dark Brethren are complete opposites in that regard
- 16:50 StarMechV ah
- 16:50 Adri_66215 I was thinking instead making it like World of Light
- 16:50 StarMechV ?
- 16:51 Adri_66215 a Galeem vs. Dharkon situation
- 16:51 StarMechV just in this case its Dark vs Dark
- 16:52 Adri_66215 well, more like Wiseman continuing to create what he calls a "perfect world" where everyone's souls are freed from their bodies (minus the whole puppet fighter thing), and the Dark Brethren breaking free of their dimensional prison again and continuing to wreak havoc
- 17:01 StarMechV Absolute Order vs Absolute Chaos
- 17:01 Adri_66215 basically
- 17:01 StarMechV i like it
- 17:01 Adri_66215 and the heroes telling them both to screw off
- 17:08 StarMechV i like it
- 17:09 StarMechV can't help but imagine in either of these plotlines kalas and xelha not getting some badass moments
- 17:09 Adri_66215 what do you mean?
- 17:11 StarMechV i mean that it sounds like they'd have some hype moments and wish i knew some
- 17:11 Adri_66215 oh yeah
- 17:11 Adri_66215 thought you said they wouldn't
- 17:15 StarMechV must have phrased it wrong
- 17:15 Adri_66215 or typod
- 17:17 StarMechV wut
- 17:18 Adri_66215 *typo'd
- 17:19 StarMechV anything you could particularly share you'd have in mind'
- 17:19 StarMechV ?*
- 17:19 StarMechV can't really make hype myself cause i know so little about Baten Kaito
- 17:19 StarMechV Kaitos*
- 17:19 Adri_66215 hm...
- 17:20 Adri_66215 well, not so hype, but also going back on Dalton, I thought of something of a Nice Job Breaking It Hero moment that would lead into the plot
- 17:22 StarMechV hm?
- 17:22 Adri_66215 so you know how I said Dalton would've found something that would've given him that soul-releasing spell, right?
- 17:24 StarMechV yup
- 17:26 Adri_66215 well, the thing in question is a walking cane that he uses as a scepter, something that belonged to a major villain that Wiseman possessed at the end
- 17:26 StarMechV uh huh
- 17:26 Adri_66215 after his defeat, that cane was left behind and it was assumed Wiseman was gone for good, but my idea is that he's actually in the cane
- 17:29 Adri_66215 so my idea is that, once they figure out that the cane is the source of that power, Kalas, after fighting against the power in it, breaks the cane in an attempt to get rid of it for good
- 17:30 StarMechV what goes wrong?
- 17:31 Adri_66215 basically, Kalas unwittingly sets Wiseman free
- 17:34 StarMechV ooooh
- 17:36 Adri_66215 like, it wouldn't be known right away (he's basically invisible and unable to be sensed), but he's got some free hearts to devour
- 17:36 Adri_66215 starting with Dalton
- 17:38 StarMechV basically dalton survived whatever last battle he had against the heroes, but then was devoured by wiseman?
- 17:39 Adri_66215 it was one idea
- 17:39 Adri_66215 the other was his own heart being released the minute the cane breaks
- 17:40 StarMechV seems good
- 17:41 StarMechV also a possibility
- 17:41 StarMechV man both are coo ways to go
- 17:41 Adri_66215 indeed
- 17:45 StarMechV cant decide
- 17:46 Adri_66215 I'm kinda leaning on the former
- 17:46 Adri_66215 mostly cuz I have the thought of Dalton left beaten and humiliated, swearing revenge...and then...
- 17:46 Adri_66215 "What comfort...malice and vengeance bring..."
- 17:47 StarMechV oooh
- 17:47 StarMechV okay im sold
- 17:47 Adri_66215 yay
- 17:48 StarMechV thats goosebump inducin
- 17:49 StarMechV like him manifesing right behind his shadow
- 17:49 Adri_66215 more like it's just his voice
- 17:50 StarMechV oooh
- 17:52 Adri_66215 like, he hears the voice, looks back and forth in panic...and then he winds up meeting the same fate he put upon the same people that tried to defy him
- 17:52 StarMechV hoo boy
- 17:53 Adri_66215 karma's a bitch
- 17:54 StarMechV up
- 17:56 StarMechV how does the dark breathen get out tho?
- 17:56 Adri_66215 that one I haven't thought into yet
- 17:57 Adri_66215 other than Convergence weakening the dimensional walls or something like that
- 18:04 StarMechV i guess, but i still feel something should still act as the trigger
- 18:05 Adri_66215 I know
- 18:05 Adri_66215 I just dunno what except the chaos breaking out over this
- 18:09 StarMechV im sure you'll figure out something
- 18:12 Adri_66215 yeah
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