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May 21st, 2019
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  1. 15:38 StarMechV for starters I was thinking, since I made Jeanne more of a character now. I'm wondering where i'd introduce her
  2. 15:38 StarMechV I still assume Roz should have some time before that, building her to have her store and a bigger bond with her friends, but still, I wonder if I could introduce her a little earlier than i originally thought
  3. 15:41 Adri_66215 did you have anything in mind regarding that?
  4. 15:43 StarMechV well probably wonder if maybe introduce her before roz's second arc
  5. 15:43 StarMechV so when its time to venture into Roz's mind and soul is not just the likes of kalas and/or Xelha and/or others
  6. 15:44 StarMechV plus it's act as a great side-arc to for Jeanne herself. Specially when she has a mini-breakdown as the fact she had grew apart from roz for a while hits her
  7. 15:44 Adri_66215 ah
  8. 15:48 StarMechV also i iamgine a nice scene with JEanne thanking Kalas for being at Roz's side when she needed it
  9. 15:51 Adri_66215 aww
  10. 15:58 StarMechV while im still not sure if keep the amnesia first plot, I still think the journey into roz's heart idea is gonna happen
  11. 15:58 StarMechV so why not spruce it up a bit?
  12. 15:59 Adri_66215 yeah
  13. 15:59 Adri_66215 likes the idea
  14. 16:01 StarMechV another idea I had
  15. 16:01 Adri_66215 hm?
  16. 16:01 StarMechV I had an idea of giving Jeanne a super form like I did wth Roz
  17. 16:01 Adri_66215 ah
  18. 16:01 StarMechV well she has power over earth and nature, why not make the ower be able to bend into a big armor for her
  19. 16:02 Adri_66215 neat
  20. 16:03 Adri_66215 admittedly imagined nothing but leaves, but that's a bit risque
  21. 16:04 StarMechV tempting, but nah
  22. 16:04 StarMechV mostly cause I feel the theme of protection kidna suits her
  23. 16:04 StarMechV heck, thanks to you thinking of the nature powers I have the best name for it
  24. 16:05 StarMechV Jeanne Chroma - Mother Gaia Form
  25. 16:05 Adri_66215 yaay
  26. 16:07 StarMechV Also was trying to think of cool scenes/moments in general for her
  27. 16:08 StarMechV mabe too much KLK in a row helpsme trying to think of hype in general XD
  28. 16:08 Adri_66215 lol
  29. 16:10 StarMechV btw did you think of a name for the crazy king villain yet?
  30. 16:11 Adri_66215 I did
  31. 16:11 Adri_66215 mentioned it before
  32. 16:12 StarMechV i must have forgotten sorry
  33. 16:13 Adri_66215 it's okay
  34. 16:13 Adri_66215 Dalton, btw
  35. 16:13 Adri_66215 another Chrono Trigger shoutout
  36. 16:17 StarMechV why chrono trigger?
  37. 16:19 Adri_66215 because some of the people who made CT (and it's sequel) also made BK
  38. 16:20 StarMechV oh i see
  39. 16:20 Adri_66215 that's also how I came up with Nadia's name
  40. 16:21 Adri_66215 in the game she was otherwise just the Ice Queen/Xelha's mom
  41. 16:22 StarMechV ah
  42. 16:25 StarMechV damn i just had an idea for a great hype scene but i guess it'd be long
  43. 16:25 StarMechV and im too lazy to write it in paste
  44. 16:25 Adri_66215 what's that?
  45. 16:27 StarMechV i dunno wha you have in mind, but I'll assume a imaginary scenario: King Dalton taking over the castle, people trapped, Xelha captured, Kayal held down and somewhat wounded as he personally wants to deal the killing blow to the man that "ruined everything" to him (cause I iamgine Dalton is THAT petty)...
  46. 16:28 StarMechV he is about to strike, when suddenly....BIG STONE FIST SPROUTING FROM THE GROUND AND UPPERCUTS HIM!
  47. 16:28 Adri_66215 SHORYUKEN
  48. 16:29 StarMechV from the hole, Jeanne Rozalin and Kalas leaping out, having escaped their own capture
  49. 16:29 Adri_66215 big damn heroes they are
  50. 16:32 StarMechV Dalton: You miserable maggots!!! -Jeanne: you foul man. We won't let you get away with this. -Dalton: Annoying harlot...you won't deprive me of my deserved revenge...
  51. 16:33 StarMechV -Jeanne: *standing in front of everyone with a determined look* Hurtng everyone to get your way...you only desire to endulge yourself rather than protecting and nutring your people...I won't stay and let you hurt this beautiful world! But most of all...I'll gladly put myself at risk...If it means protecting the Man I have grown to Love!! We WILL stop you!!!
  52. 16:33 Adri_66215 likes this
  53. 16:35 StarMechV (as a small moment of levity) -Rozali: *behind her while still combat ready* Hehe, wow Mom, you really went all out on that. I guess you really wanted to sound badass in front of Mr. Kayal -Jeanne: *blushing going briefly back into shy woman mode* I-i w-wasn't really I...um just came out like that!
  54. 16:36 StarMechV Rozalin: *smirks* Nah, it's fine. That was so cool!
  55. 16:36 StarMechV just came to mind mind, that's all
  56. 16:38 Adri_66215 it's fine, I like the idea
  57. 16:38 Adri_66215 though I imagine Dalton might've taken over the castle for a long while before this
  58. 16:38 StarMechV I still assume the big final confrontation'd mostly be focused on kalas and xelha, but just thought i could give Jeanne a moment
  59. 16:38 StarMechV as I'd imagine her and Kayal growing close would be building and lead into this too
  60. 16:39 Adri_66215 yeah
  61. 16:39 Adri_66215 thinks all of them would have a part in this
  62. 16:39 StarMechV yes
  63. 16:40 StarMechV well roz a bit being on the back. while a big support, i don't feel it's much of a big emotional turnpoint for her character
  64. 16:40 StarMechV more like a solidification of it
  65. 16:40 Adri_66215 yeah
  66. 16:43 StarMechV i am curious if you'd still be suign stuff of your original Wiseman plot
  67. 16:43 Adri_66215 is, but is considering making some changes
  68. 16:43 StarMechV would it still involve summoning a big dragon? or you'd save that for wiseman
  69. 16:44 StarMechV cause I remembered another hype scene I once told you involving characters of mine as well
  70. 16:44 Adri_66215 I am keeping the dragon, yes
  71. 16:44 Adri_66215 but what scene?
  72. 16:46 StarMechV heaby weight battle
  73. 16:46 StarMechV dark dragon vs Giant Clank
  74. 16:46 Adri_66215 oh yeah
  75. 16:48 Adri_66215 has been thinking a little on the Wiseman plot itself, btw
  76. 16:48 StarMechV hm?
  77. 16:48 Adri_66215 it's mostly in regards to the Dark Brethren
  78. 16:48 StarMechV do tell
  79. 16:49 Adri_66215 I know the initial idea was to have a sort of team-up, but Wiseman and the Dark Brethren are complete opposites in that regard
  80. 16:50 StarMechV ah
  81. 16:50 Adri_66215 I was thinking instead making it like World of Light
  82. 16:50 StarMechV ?
  83. 16:51 Adri_66215 a Galeem vs. Dharkon situation
  84. 16:51 StarMechV just in this case its Dark vs Dark
  85. 16:52 Adri_66215 well, more like Wiseman continuing to create what he calls a "perfect world" where everyone's souls are freed from their bodies (minus the whole puppet fighter thing), and the Dark Brethren breaking free of their dimensional prison again and continuing to wreak havoc
  86. 17:01 StarMechV Absolute Order vs Absolute Chaos
  87. 17:01 Adri_66215 basically
  88. 17:01 StarMechV i like it
  89. 17:01 Adri_66215 and the heroes telling them both to screw off
  90. 17:08 StarMechV i like it
  91. 17:09 StarMechV can't help but imagine in either of these plotlines kalas and xelha not getting some badass moments
  92. 17:09 Adri_66215 what do you mean?
  93. 17:11 StarMechV i mean that it sounds like they'd have some hype moments and wish i knew some
  94. 17:11 Adri_66215 oh yeah
  95. 17:11 Adri_66215 thought you said they wouldn't
  96. 17:15 StarMechV must have phrased it wrong
  97. 17:15 Adri_66215 or typod
  98. 17:17 StarMechV wut
  99. 17:18 Adri_66215 *typo'd
  100. 17:19 StarMechV anything you could particularly share you'd have in mind'
  101. 17:19 StarMechV ?*
  102. 17:19 StarMechV can't really make hype myself cause i know so little about Baten Kaito
  103. 17:19 StarMechV Kaitos*
  104. 17:19 Adri_66215 hm...
  105. 17:20 Adri_66215 well, not so hype, but also going back on Dalton, I thought of something of a Nice Job Breaking It Hero moment that would lead into the plot
  106. 17:22 StarMechV hm?
  107. 17:22 Adri_66215 so you know how I said Dalton would've found something that would've given him that soul-releasing spell, right?
  108. 17:24 StarMechV yup
  109. 17:26 Adri_66215 well, the thing in question is a walking cane that he uses as a scepter, something that belonged to a major villain that Wiseman possessed at the end
  110. 17:26 StarMechV uh huh
  111. 17:26 Adri_66215 after his defeat, that cane was left behind and it was assumed Wiseman was gone for good, but my idea is that he's actually in the cane
  112. 17:29 Adri_66215 so my idea is that, once they figure out that the cane is the source of that power, Kalas, after fighting against the power in it, breaks the cane in an attempt to get rid of it for good
  113. 17:30 StarMechV what goes wrong?
  114. 17:31 Adri_66215 basically, Kalas unwittingly sets Wiseman free
  115. 17:34 StarMechV ooooh
  116. 17:36 Adri_66215 like, it wouldn't be known right away (he's basically invisible and unable to be sensed), but he's got some free hearts to devour
  117. 17:36 Adri_66215 starting with Dalton
  118. 17:38 StarMechV basically dalton survived whatever last battle he had against the heroes, but then was devoured by wiseman?
  119. 17:39 Adri_66215 it was one idea
  120. 17:39 Adri_66215 the other was his own heart being released the minute the cane breaks
  121. 17:40 StarMechV seems good
  122. 17:41 StarMechV also a possibility
  123. 17:41 StarMechV man both are coo ways to go
  124. 17:41 Adri_66215 indeed
  125. 17:45 StarMechV cant decide
  126. 17:46 Adri_66215 I'm kinda leaning on the former
  127. 17:46 Adri_66215 mostly cuz I have the thought of Dalton left beaten and humiliated, swearing revenge...and then...
  128. 17:46 Adri_66215 "What comfort...malice and vengeance bring..."
  129. 17:47 StarMechV oooh
  130. 17:47 StarMechV okay im sold
  131. 17:47 Adri_66215 yay
  132. 17:48 StarMechV thats goosebump inducin
  133. 17:49 StarMechV like him manifesing right behind his shadow
  134. 17:49 Adri_66215 more like it's just his voice
  135. 17:50 StarMechV oooh
  136. 17:52 Adri_66215 like, he hears the voice, looks back and forth in panic...and then he winds up meeting the same fate he put upon the same people that tried to defy him
  137. 17:52 StarMechV hoo boy
  138. 17:53 Adri_66215 karma's a bitch
  139. 17:54 StarMechV up
  140. 17:56 StarMechV how does the dark breathen get out tho?
  141. 17:56 Adri_66215 that one I haven't thought into yet
  142. 17:57 Adri_66215 other than Convergence weakening the dimensional walls or something like that
  143. 18:04 StarMechV i guess, but i still feel something should still act as the trigger
  144. 18:05 Adri_66215 I know
  145. 18:05 Adri_66215 I just dunno what except the chaos breaking out over this
  146. 18:09 StarMechV im sure you'll figure out something
  147. 18:12 Adri_66215 yeah
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