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- Hey there! :3
- I love the additions of structure you've added to the plot; they look lovely!
- However, there were other elements of my review that you didn't add to your plot.
- Please add some other styles of trees, as well as some atmosphere to the area - read my other review for more description.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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