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Jun 14th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. I love the additions of structure you've added to the plot; they look lovely!
  4. However, there were other elements of my review that you didn't add to your plot.
  5. Please add some other styles of trees, as well as some atmosphere to the area - read my other review for more description.
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  7. Good luck!
  8. - Dutty :3
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