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Apr 11th, 2015
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  1. Hey there!
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  3. Firstly, your terrain. I get the premise, but it's way too simple. Your terrain is completely flat on all three sides - the floor, the walls and the ceiling. It's going to need some diversity in layers, not all flat, similar to what you started in the corner. I think this plot would also benefit from a mixture of blocks in the palette, not all netherrack.
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  5. Secondly, organics. The organics you've made are spawned in mushrooms. If you want to do this, please build your own. Spawned in things show no creativity and are therefore instantly rejected.
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  7. Lastly, your structure. You have none. A plot can get away with having no structure, but everything else needs to be fantastic, which unfortunately this plot isn't. It's good, but it's just a little too simple to pass.
  8. A Nether themed building could fit nicely if you took out the ceiling. You could have a nice tall building made from netherbrick, which some coloured clay, red and oranges maybe :3
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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