Important Changes or Notes
Made it rain at the end of Prologue 2.
Changed around Nyx’s final words and Kronos’s response Prolouge.4
Changed the fight scenes of Prolouge.4, although the outcome is the same, the journey is different. Made it more “Last Standish”
Added an important line in the last parts of prologue 4. “Something” was in the void.
Dropped high end of Elf age from 400 to 350, Ch.2.
Removed this from Dr. Jacobs’s background Ch.4 “He had traveled the world for years as a Grandmaster of the school of light magic”
Added a line from Alanis in Ch.4, “I also didn’t want him to walk a similar path that we did…
Changed Dr. Jacobs’s age from 89 to 84 Ch.4
Added a few lines about Cerila’s cloak and Kaladin’s Mom maybe knowing about it. Ch.7
Added a bit more on runesmithithing, “Runes also have to be maintained, and if they are broken only a runesmith can fix them” Ch.9
Threw back the Talgan timeline an extra 1k years. Making it 2 millennia ago. Ch.12
Added more moons. “Not only that having 4 more moons of similar size was something else” Total of 5 moons. Ch.16
Made the “Primary” Moon “closer”, so making it bigger in the night sky. Ch.16


General Changes
Grammar and spelling
Syntax
General post structure to bring in line with most recent chapters.
Sprucing up some dialogue


Prologue. 1
General Changes

Prologue. 2
General Changes
Lots of dialogue change, but nothing new to the story
Changed the helmet flash resistance from “Guarantee” to “Mostly.
Made it rain in the final sequence

Prolouge.3
General Changes
Altered conversion somewhat with Dr. Suarez, nothing major.
Changed the conversation with Heimdall, nothing major. Small allude to the epilogue
Changed the final conversation around with Suarez.

Prolouge.4
General Changes
Changed around Nyx’s final words and Kronos’s response
Changed the fight scenes of Prolouge.4, although the outcome is the same, the journey is different. Made it more “Last Standish”
Added an important line in the last parts of prologue 4. “Something” was in the void.

Chapter. 1 Unfamiliar Faces in Unfamiliar
General Changes
Made sure the title is correct because I was an idiot.
Changed some of the descriptions for the house. Nothing major.
Added a bit extra to the armor description.

Ch.2- Magic Really is Dangerous.
General changes.
Changed around the conversation with Alanis and Kaladin on their walk a bit. Nothing major.
Dropped high end of Elf age from 400 to 350

Ch.3- Lessons to Be Learned
General Changes.

Ch.4-Family and a Promise.
General Changes.
Removed this from Dr. Jacobs background “He had traveled the world for years as a Grandmaster of the school of light magic”
Added a line from Alanis, “I also didn’t want him to walk a similar path that we did...
Changed Dr. Jacobs age from 89 to 84
Changed the initial attack from fire to lightning

Ch.5- Reconciliation.
General Changes
Some dialogue additions, nothing major.

Ch.6-An Arctic Fox in the Jungle
General Changes

Ch.7-A New Friend.
General Changes.
Do the title right because I’m dumb.
Added a few lines about Cerila’s cloak and Kaladin’s Mom maybe knowing about it.
Changed around the post-fight conversation with Dad and Kaladin a bit. The message is the same.

Ch.8- First Day of School.
General Changes.

Ch.9- The Future Runesmith.
General Changes
Added a bit more on runesmithithing, “Runes also have to be maintained, and if they are broken only a runesmith can fix them”

Ch.10-Magic Sparring.
General Changes
Threw back the Talgan timeline an extra 1k years. Making it 2 millennia ago.

Ch.11-A Friend in Need?
General Changes

Ch. 12 A Promise Kept and a Promise Made
General Changes
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Changed “I should sleep in your room tonight” to “I could sleep in your room tonight”

Ch. 13 Father and Son Bonding
General Changes

Ch.14 Good Things Come in Pairs
Generael Changes

Ch. 15 Coming Down With the Sickness
General Changes

Ch. 16 Lingering Hopes
General Changes
Added more moons. “Not only that having 4 more moons of similar similar size was something else”
Made the “Primary” Moon “closer”, so making it bigger in the night sky.
Ch. 17 Hunting Trip
General Changes