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- 1:33 - This spot's pretty good, although I'd tell Rein to stay on the right side instead of the left
- 1:37 - Pointless nade
- 2:33 - I would play more defensively here; your Rein is nowhere in sight. Don't expose your position needlessly
- 2:35 - Ditch Mei; she's doomed
- 2:49 - Habits die hard: you can't heal up anti'd teammates :(
- 2:45 - If you miss a Dragonblade sleep, always back up
- 3:06 - You're extremely low. Stay back and just scope in; any stray shot will kill you
- 3:40 - After you notice that Rein is full, you should stop topping him off and look around to make sure the zone's secure
- 3:45 - The Pharah hitting you was ill approached, but I see why you couldn't follow up with it properly. For the future, consider hiding inside the room behind you and simply peek and scope healing
- 4:03 - Don't tunnel vision on Pharah
- 4:08 - IMHO, the better decision would've been to anti-heal the enemy Rein. He's all alone, which means swapping heals between Rein and Roadhog would've been enough to keep them alive
- 4:09 - Rein's critical; heal him
- 4:12 - You still haven't noticed your critical Rein
- 4:15 - As soon as you hear Genji use Dragonblade, you should've just hid behind the gate to the left here and peeked to unscope heal Roadhog. Genji probably didn't see you, which means you could've survived
- 4:54 - Scope/quick scope here. You can't afford to miss
- 4:58 - Top off Mei
- 5:04 - You still haven't topped off Mei
- 5:06 - I don't blame you for missing this dart; a lot was going on which impeded your vision
- 5:20 - Nitpick: Quickscope Mercy
- 5:21 - Questionable sleep
- 5:33 - Just stay inside the building; no real reason to go outside and let Pharah find you
- 5:53 - They're running Widow on King's Row. Never, ever, peek. Ever. You knew about the Widow when she was trying to shoot Mercy
- 5:58 - Pointless darts
- 6:07 - Nade Roadhog much earlier. Literally as soon as you saw him walking in, he should've been naded
- 6:25 - It's generally not a good idea to look around for a Pharah. Just hide in a safe spot and wait for her to come to you
- 6:29 - You peeked out for no reason
- 6:56 - Everyone's dead. Let them have the checkpoint
- 7:20 - With most of them up top like this, opt to move further back so you don't have to look straight up
- 7:29 - Bad sleep
- 7:43 - You had no reason to go through this building
- 7:48 - Nano Rein; he charged into danger
- 8:00 - That was way too risky to engage Roadhog like that; you're lucky he was focused on your Pharah instead
- 8:08 - Move further back, you don't have a clear sight of your whole team
- 8:15 - Really poor decision to look for Pharah like this
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- Additional Remarks:
- - You did remarkably well for your rank. There wasn't really any glaring issues with your gameplay, so just focus on refinement.
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