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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot so far, but theres some stuff to work on before ranking up!
- Theres not a lot of terrain on your plot, but the structure makes up for it by covering most of the land and what you do have of terrain is nice. Not too rough and not too smooth, just even terrain, and thats something we look for :) However, at this rank, we do expect you to be more creative with your terrain, as now you have the world edit brush.
- Also, having a palette in your terrain could be beneficial. Adding blocks like lime clay, or green wool can give your grass more texture and make it seem less flat.
- Your structure layout is nice, but it lacks in depth and detailing. Add more layers to your structure, pushing and pulling some out to give your build a sense of deepness to it. Thats depth.
- Detail and accent your build with stairs, slabs, fences, or even buttons to make it more appealing and interesting. Not by putting fences up and down the build, but by accenting certain points, like around the roofs, the bridges, the windows, or even the base of the builds.
- Sidenote, try to stick with full blocks for your roofs, and keep the stairs for detailing x3
- Your organics look bonemealed. Organics is an umbrella word for anything that would be living in real life, so here im referring to your trees.
- Try to build them up and make them bigger. Custom trees are always a must for plots because it shows skill if you can do them right. Build up the trunk with logs to give it more of an organic shape to it and make branches that stretch out to grab sunlight!
- You can spam leaves on the trees, but ill show you a trick to making the leaves by using world edit!
- Hold a stick and type this command in chat: //mask air
- Then type this one: //br sphere 20%leaves,80%air
- Then click away at your tree! The brush command is what i just showed you, and its very useful! If you dont want to use it, thats fine too!
- Hope this helps! Good luck!
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