4chan Hazbin Hotel story - DC what if part 1

from /hhg/ Hazbin Hotel general #419, #422 and #426
part 1: https://pastebin.com/LwRxTRNH
part 2: https://pastebin.com/7yHcR14j
part 3: https://pastebin.com/AfxC5i7f
Big Brothers is Back - de-conditioning part 1: https://pastebin.com/mW1E0BCD
Big Brothers is Back - de-conditioning part 2: https://pastebin.com/T8gpjxCJ
Dictator charlie dealing with her inner demons part 1: https://pastebin.com/eKiaizwB
part 4: https://pastebin.com/uHK1m26T
DC timeline Octavia: https://pastebin.com/tmxYDp4t
Dictator charlie - alt-ending: https://pastebin.com/NREXyytV
DC what if part 2: https://pastebin.com/9B0FTHnT
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y'know i just came up with an idea (one which is admittedly dumb and ooc for even dictator charlie)
in the what-if of her killing her brother what if, after killing him, she has his body repurposed as both a guard and a high general for her army
or essentially rework his now reanimated brain into being compliant with her dictatorship and just being at her side whenever

yes i know this is pretty EDGY
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Having your central nervous system wired into a giant death robot and being forced to kill your friends is pretty fucking brutal.
I like it, it reminds of Robo-Cop 2.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1N8FpOC8ZyA
Plus its fitting for Dicator Charlie because, she's fucking brutal as fuck (see Val's death.)
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i'm thinking less of a Giant death robot and more of a sleek death robot like the exterminators

allows anon to move around the fuckhuge house he, charlie, and her friends live in
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Why not just make him into an Exterminator?
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nah, anon just got to make him into an offbrand hell exterminator

charlie obviously hasn't had the greatest of experiences with heaven's exterminators
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>Anon ends up looking like General Darian
>Rebellion is attempted
>"THEY'LL BURY YOU IN A LUNCHBOX"
>Ludicrous gibs!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VTxYdoJ0Qgc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FaxBhTSYo_g
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Better idea, turn him into Big John.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h2nmjK0Ahic
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yes
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>anon's rebellion is started and ended by his own hand
truly an example of a greek tragedy
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Charlie's just like
>"Aw fuck I forgot to install the self-preservation software didn't I?"
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>charlie didn't update anon's software to the most recent version so he has to restart
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>>"Aw fuck I forgot to install the self-preservation software didn't I?"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nECsWAqMJgo
Told you it was like Robo-Cop
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>Guilt and Anger are on the same side for a change
>The former is on her knees in despair
>The latter is a fireball of shrieking rage
>They're both asking the same thing

>What

>H̷A̵V̸E̷

>W̷̞̜̑͗ͅ ̶̧̳͕̼̎È̸̦̹̼͎͑̍̎̾͘

>D̴̗̗̤̃̀̊̒̍ ̵̧̡̨̥̈́̀̆͝ͅƠ̴̧͓̹̖͈͊̄͗͝͝ ̵̱͖̇͌͌Ñ̴̺̳̯̥̘̦̄̇̕͝ ̶̢̗̯̤̺͇͋͒Ȩ̸̢̻̟͎̥̓͛̀̍̕ ̸̧̗͔͔͒͛́͋̈́?̴̡̫̰͘
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>pride is...
>conflicted to say the least
>she knows that anon is now the most perfect killing machine she's/they've created
>perfect for snuffing out rebellions and is incredibly loyal to a T
>but she also knows that before he was this...
machine
>he was her/their brother
>and she knew that due to him being family he had to be at least almost as perfect as she/they were and she sometimes thinks that...
>maybe the resurrection and modification's were unnecessary for such a good brother
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>Charlie looks at the android body Anon inhabits
>It looks like him to a point, just mechanical
>He doesn't eat, sleep, or even breath
>Even if he could he would need her permission
"Anon."
>The machine body faces her awaiting orders
"You may speak freely."
>"I̵'̵m̸ ̸c̵o̸l̸d̶.̸ ̶W̸h̸y̴ ̴a̷m̴ ̶I̴ ̸s̶o̶ ̷c̷o̸l̵d̸?̶ ̶I̴t̷ ̴h̷u̵r̴t̶s̵,̵ ̵i̸s̵ ̷s̴o̵m̵e̵t̷h̵i̷n̶g̵ ̸w̷r̷o̸n̴g̴ ̶w̵i̸t̶h̷ ̷m̶e̵?̵"
"You just had an accident. Don't worry, I'll..."
>Charlies sentence fades off as she hears quiet sobbing coming from the machine body
"Mute audio."
>The sobbing quiets instantly
>Charlie puts her head into her hands
"What have I done..."
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while we're on the subject

how would octavia react to this?
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Hmmm...
>Octavia looks at the cybernetic body of Anon, who is standing at his sisters side
"What happened?"
>"Anon was gravelly injured, somehow the rebel Cherri came back. She used seraphic steel for shrapnel and hellfire in the bombs she used, sadly this was the best we could do..."
>Octavia knows that Charlie speaks in half truths, if not outright lying the whole time
>Something happened to Anon and Charlie has something to do with it
>Octavia walks up to Anon, he looks down at her
>The still organic parts of his face remain passive as he looks down at her
>She rests a hand onto his cheek, tears well up in Anons remaining eye
'Charlie went too far.'
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>The remainder of her "old friends" are all in a panic but trying to hide it
>The queen's heart had seemed to be thawing since her brother came back to her
>She took a gentler hand in matters when he was near her
>It had almost seemed like he might be able to wring a little bit of the old Charlie out of Queen Charlotte

>But now, he's...
>Well, he can't help anyone anymore
>Charlie has been telling them since she took the throne that they would be safe
>It's clear that they're not
>No one is
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does that mean Octavia end up turn into Kylo Ren to "i will finish what you started" anon rebellions?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H23z9Nv_GsE
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oh idea, Octavia get help from Helsa von Eldritch to finish anon rebellions and overthrow charlie
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but how did Octavia find Helsa?, she left hell like it's nobody's business.

btw adding eldritch horrors in this dark story and making it more dark is going to be something
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Well, (maybe) most likely Helsa give something to Octavia to call her if she want to talk again.

after Charlie turn her own brother into robocop, Octavia had enough and called Helsa.

when Helsa hear what Charlie did to her own brother and other stuff, her own hate for Charlie turn into a fucking volcano.
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>Dictator Charlie Bad End
>Despite having turned Anon into a cybernetic slave-warrior of horrifying power, Cherri's revolt is still making more gains than any before
>Moxxie pretended that his brainwashing returned after Anon was no longer there to try to fix it
>It didn't
>He's more or less back, and he's been surreptitiously feeding Cherri and her rebels info on overwatch forces that leads to them consistently outmaneuvering Charlie's armies
>As her stranglehold on Hell slowly collapses and the territory she still controls dwindles, she starts to go from unmerciful to kill-em-all-they're-all-guilty levels of internal genocide
>Something she says during a violent tirade sets Anon off and he goes full Jaime Lannister, turning on his monarch and murdering her as she rants endlessly about slaughtering her own people en masse
>Then he turns his weapon on himself and puts an end to the Magne's rule of Hell forever
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Idea from a past thread: Solagne meets Cyber-Anon (DC bad end)

>Solagne ran as fast as she could
>Unfortunately for her, this wasn't nearly fast enough
>She was only running because her wings had been crippled by The Scarlet Queen's anti-air defenses
>Between the pain and the blood loss, merely running in a straight line was quickly becoming a task far beyond her abilities
>Her heart sank, and tears began to stream down her face as the inevitability of her fate began to sink in
>She couldn't escape Queen Charlotte's newest war machine
>She wasn't going to be taken to see her mother

>She was never going to see Heaven again

>This nondescript corner of what had once been Pentagram City was going to be her grave
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>CyberAnon after realizing what happened to him
>I never ask for this
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>Solagne shrieks and gasps for air as the newest of Charlies monsters picks her up by the neck
>She kicks her legs and pounds her fists on the mechanical wrist holding her aloft to no avail
>She reaches out and grabs at a gap in the faceplate and desperately pulls it off
>What greets her is the face of Anon
>His skin is sickly pale and scarred from burns, cuts and surgery
>His eyes are bloodshot and his pupils are dilated
>She can hear his labored breathing without the faceplate blocking the sound
>She manages to choke out a single word
"Anon..."
>Since this is a fight for her life she jams a thumb into his right eye
>He lets out a yell and tosses her aside to tend to the wound
>Her flight begins again
Thought id add to it
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>The former exterminator rounded a corner
>And nearly ran headlong into one of the Queen's smaller enforcers
>It struck at her, and she dodged
>Poorly
>She had a natural instinct to flap her wings to further propel herself away from danger when evading a foe
>But her wings were little more than exposed bone and charred flesh now
>The act makes her scream
>She whirled about in spite of the pain and darted down a broad alleyway between two of the monolithic sinner housing blocks
>She made little progress before being forced to duck as a neon-red fireball collided with the wall beside her, sending debris raining down and knocking her off her feet
>Unable to even run now, she crawled as quickly as she could to any sort of cover she could find
>It was inadequate

>"A̵̳̐ ̶̫̉N̸̗͘ ̸̥͝G̷̛̭ ̴̠̽E̴̠͂ ̷̤́L̸̩͋"

>Anon had found her again

>"E̷̠͠ ̴̹́M̵̬͑ ̶̦̍B̵̫̑ ̷̧͆R̶̤͛ ̸͙̏Ạ̸͊ ̴̖̾C̵̤̍ ̷̡̌Ė̵̹ ̶̦̈́ ̸̦̑D̵̛̮ ̶̧̉Ě̸̝ ̷͎̚A̴̦͌ ̵̑T̴̑͜ ̵̪H̸̢̎"

>The horrid fusion of flesh and machinery raised its weapon to her, glowing with hellfire

>So, this was what it felt like
>This is what all of her victims must have felt like in their final moments
>In a way, it was cathartic, this feeling

>She looked past the roiling hot barrel of the weapon, up into the monstrosity's one remaining good eye
>There was nothing left of the demon she'd met the other day
>The empathy he seemed to have in abundance even for those who didn't deserve it was gone

>"Oh, Anon..."

>Solagne closed her eyes

>"...what has she done to you?"

>Hellfire roared forth, and the angel was no more
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>The new figurehead of the Enforcers of The Queen's Will opened a communication line to Pandemonium
>Owing to its rank and origins, it did not have to wade through the usual layers of middlemen and electronic handshakes to get direct access to the highest authority in Hell

>ENFORCER OMEGA-1 REPORTING IN
>MISSION ACCOMPLISHED, MY QUEEN

>Far away, Charlie allowed herself a coldly satisfied smile
>It had been a long, long time, but payback had been delivered
>No one crossed Queen Charlotte and got away with it
>No one

>"And your secondary objective?"

>Omega-1 examined the remains of its target
>There was very little left of her
>Most of the angel's body was nothing but an ashen stain

>But the halo was intact

>Slightly scorched, but still in one piece to be sure
>The enforcer reached down to pick it up, shaking off ash and burnt blood

>SECONDARY OBJECTIVE ACCOMPLISHED

>"Good. Return to the palace. You're done for the day."

>YES, MY QUEEN
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>Charlie set the microphone down
>She clapped her gloved hands together and laughed hoarsely into the empty room
>A clear-cut victory, with a trophy to boot
>She'd always wanted an intact halo
>And now she had one
>She wasn't sure what she'd do with it yet, but it would be nice to have
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>Down in The Abyss, Abaddon stirred
>Another soul had been cast down into his realm
>A single soul, alone, and at an odd time, not like the great masses that had begun to fall into The Darkness all at once on a depressingly predictable schedule
>He began to feel his way through the nothingness until he found them

>As he grew closer he could see that they were an odd specimen of Creation indeed
>An angel
>It had been millennia since last an angel was cast down here
>He drew closer, and found her weeping, tears scattering across The Void

>"Oh, you poor thing."

>The Destroyer knelt down beside his newest guest in nonexistence

>"What has Creation done to you?"

>The little angel could only weep harder at the question
>Abaddon reached out to place a comforting hand on her

>"Worry not."
>"The time will come when we will unmake all of it."
>"And it will not be able to hurt any of us anymore."

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Is anon even truly alive anymore?
>Abadon looks to the flickering soul
>The prince, stuck between life and death
>Neither truly living or dead
"Child of the Morning Star, soon you will rest here among the abyss. Your suffering has an end, you will have to endure it a little longer."
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Being "alive" is kind of tricky in the context of a world where people can be born directly into the afterlife and can't "die" unless "killed" in specific ways. I'd say he's probably teetering between existing and not existing. Whatever Charlie did to kill him probably pushed him firmly toward nonexistent, maybe muting demons ability to bounce back from injuries. He probably needs more maintenence and medical attention than he would have had he remained intact.
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Well in the octavia greentext it said that cherri used seraphic steel for shrapnel and Hellfire in her bombs so getting shredded by mini exterminator metal mixed with hellfire, which burns the body and soul, would fuck up anything
>Majority of his soul and body are damaged or burnt away
>It's a miracle that he's still alive
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Well, CHARLIE said that's what happened. You really can't trust her word in this timeline.
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Exterminator grade surgical equipment and hellfire to cauterize wounds?
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I sure as shit hope they had some powerful anesthetics for that
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We need some D. Charlie fluff
>New sayings caused by her rise to power
Could be anything, just fluff.
Saying someone has eyes like the Queen means their eyes are red. Loona gets that a lot.
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>Charlie's war against the wastelands was not a clean war.
>None of the bandit cities even ended up with tattoos or official liquidation dates or sin reviews
>They were struck down savagely as soon as they were vulnerable
>Many of them actually surrendered one it became clear they couldn't overcome Charlotte's endless forces and boundless hunger for conquest
>She offered them mercy for a pledge of loyalty, they accepted, then she had them butchered once they were unarmed
>"Going out like a bandit" means failing to see through an obvious lie and getting yourself killed for it.