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- Novice Review:
- Interesting that you changed the trees in to mushrooms, but trees and mushrooms have very different shapes and you cant just replace the existing blocks. Mushrooms have more of a solid cap to them that flares out on the edges or more or a point to the tops, whereas trees have more of a ball shape to the leaves and dont have a solid top. So if youre making a transition to the plot i would keep that in mind.
- The structures generally look the same as they did the first time i reviewed you so please please change them up and add appropriate detailing and layers to the structures to create depth.
- ALSO: if youre putting mushrooms in instead of trees, that changes the feel of the plot and now it seems more fantasy with the giant mushies. So a constant theme is necessary since you dont want the plot to be so random.
- Good luck!
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