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- Hey there :3
- Firstly, the terrain. I like the concept of this plot. You have a bit too much 'cloud' area covering the plot, however. I think it'd be better if you had some more of the sphere island around the plot, maybe smaller, maybe bigger.
- You have one organic - don't get me wrong, it's really nice! But you could have more on the other islands too.
- There's nothing to fault about the things you have built on this plot, however for the things you haven't built; you really need structure. Again, I'd suggest building some houses/towers on more floating island things.
- This was a poorly worded review.
- Basically first step; more of the islands you have in the centre; it's good but not enough.
- Secondly; more organics and structure; these can be on the new floating islands you create.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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