DrummerNeptune's spark review

Hi there DrummerNeptune!

So, unfortunately I cannot uprank you due to a couple of issues in your plot. Don't worry! We can work on this all.

So, you're obviously new to Sunfury and that's cool, we need new people!

However, to uprank to ember you need to fill in three criteria.

You must have:

Structure (Buildings, towers, castles, etc)
Organics (Tree's, bushes, flowers, etc)
Terrain (The environment, hills, valleys, etc)

Your plot needs rethinking, as it is pure structure at the moment. To pass Spark and move onto Ember, you need to show skill in those three areas. I'd recommend starting again with a new idea, such as a cottage in the woods on a hill, that kind of stuff. My advice? Think of an ideal a story, then create it on your plot. Also, most sparks create a large hill and a smaller structure with some tree's to move to ember, that's always a good idea. If not, do something different and just use your imagination, afterall, that's what Sunfury is for!

~HeyItsElla