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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, I really like this plot! Lovely terrain, lovely organics and lovely structures! It just needs some more of all that stuff. Organics wise, it's fine, however the fact that all the trees look the same is a little off putting; make some that are a little different to the ones you have - maybe some larger? (Not including the tree in the underground area of course)
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  5. Secondly, the decoration on your plot looks really nice, but its a little too spotted and random - there's no context as to why there are carrots/melons in the middle of nowhere. It'd be really nice if you had some more pathways running round the area, with some dense patches of wheat/carrots etc.
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  7. Lastly, structure, as I've told you, you need some more of. Just some smaller buildings around the place would suffice, but you could also have another tower or something if you wanted! Maybe some buildings in the underground area too.
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  9. Good luck!
  10. - Dutty :3
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