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- from /mmm/ Mao Mao General - Heroes of Shiny Buts
- part 1: h ttps://pastebin.com/FaMd80cv
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- from the Previous thread, part 2: h ttps://pastebin.com/g21Mj5Tj
- ok, now for his starting weapons is the Hattori Katana (of course) but I feel like his other stuff would get destroy when he face that corpse eating monster.
- I don't know what kind of Amulet he will get and the power scrolls (need to think about that later).
- but what kind of place will the beheaded met the corpse eating monster?... should it be in the cave or somewhere in mountain?.
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- oh sht, I forgot about Mutations
- h ttps://deadcells.fandom.com/wiki/Mutations
- hm... I want to say that he have Initiative, Vengeance, and Open Wounds.
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- hey I am wondering, has anyone made name's for mao mao sisters?...
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- >>43822261
- Yeah sorry for not responding yesterday, slipped by or something. Personally think somewhere on a mountainous path would be nice - just feel like caves would be a bit predictable overall. Kinda stumble upon the corpse eating monster while looking for something or while it's eating mid snack etc.
- >>43825356
- >>43840319
- Not sure about mutations but those sound decent, might think of one or two others which could work better. And I'm not aware of others who've named his sisters - ofc haven't dug into the fan stories so eh. Even then shouldn't stop you from giving them a different name.
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- >Yeah sorry for not responding yesterday, slipped by or something. Personally think somewhere on a mountainous path would be nice - just feel like caves would be a bit predictable overall. Kinda stumble upon the corpse eating monster while looking for something or while it's eating mid snack etc.
- I like that idea, thanks.
- >Not sure about mutations but those sound decent, might think of one or two others which could work better. And I'm not aware of others who've named his sisters - ofc haven't dug into the fan stories so eh. Even then shouldn't stop you from giving them a different name.
- well you can pick 3 in the game, i had an idea that the beheaded & the corpse eating monster trade each other. corpse eating monster got a "killing blow" on him but with the beheaded mutations, it made the monster bleed out to death.
- also I was hoping someone would send me or tell me what fan made names for the sister's.
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- Brunhilde (spear sister) is the only one with a known name. Minori was also mentioned but we don't know which sister the name belongs to
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- I think Minori is the one with the Bangles or the one with the hat
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- >>43846687
- >i had an idea that the beheaded & the corpse eating monster trade each other. corpse eating monster got a "killing blow" on him but with the beheaded mutations, it made the monster bleed out to death.
- I like that concept, interesting to see it play out etc.
- >>43846770
- Ah, guess I forgot about the sister's names being brought up.
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- >I like that concept, interesting to see it play out etc.
- yeah, also I need some pic of when we see mao mao home.
- and fan names for mao mao mom & her other sisters. need those as well
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- We've seen some glimpses of his home here and there and could mention those spots, not worrying about constructing the whole house.
- Being your story n all it doesn't have to be continuous with other stories so personally I wouldn't worry about names matching other fan stories. As long as it's something logically appropriate for the Mao clan think it'd be fine
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- alright, I will try to think of something and going to try to make this into a story (it's been a long time since i did that)
- but so far in my head that one who has "sight beyond sight" got sick when they came to show up to mom birthday, so it be the reason how the corpse eating monster got away with one of their ancestor body.
- also should it be shin mao be the reason why mao mao is not there because he forgot to tell him or mao mao call his mom that "l'm sorry that I have to miss your birthday mom. but I have to deal with this spider monster that is taking over the kingdom, I will send you something special, I promise."
- which one?
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- Hmm I think the whole him calling his mom angle is a good angle and fits his busy sheriff schedule, both could work really.
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- thank pal but i have to go to do stuff.
- hope someone keep this thread not dead.
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- h ttps://twitter.com/cartoonnetwork/status/1469382421216903176
- i'll try to since CN's got some other excuse to avoid talking about mao mao
- >>43852511
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- i am back and holy sht, it's raining like hell outside.
- >h ttps://twitter.com/cartoonnetwork/status/1469382421216903176
- wt is that?
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- /wbb/'s unfair and undeserved punishment
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- it look like an AU of a show
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- it definitely feels like it since chong's been relegated to an executive producer status and the one replacing him is this bozo
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- fking wow
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- man, I am sorry that I have to go when I already got back.
- but When I get back on here tomorrow, I am going to try to make that dead cells crossover story that I been talking in here.
- see you guys tomorrow
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- >see ya!
- ok, i am wake. it's 12:34 AM right now... so let see how long this will take.
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- so, I got my flu shot yesterday and now my body is telling me.
- "hey, you have fever now. f-k you"
- my head hurts
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- Hmm yeah if your head is hurting best not to fight against it else shit will get worse. Tis a rough cut you got so far, but tis a starting point
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- ok, I am wake now and feeling better
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- glad you're feeling better fren
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- thanks
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- here a update of what I have so far
- h ttps://ghostbin.com/MAlsD
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- what do you guys think of it so far?
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- morning frens
- >>43903422
- >>43906405
- it isn't bad but a bit static, what I'd expect with an unfinished story or rough draft anyways. Keep it up good sir
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- >morning frens
- morning
- >it isn't bad but a bit static, what I'd expect with an unfinished story or rough draft anyways. Keep it up good sir
- thanks, don't worry Iksa is going to show up soon and be sick as well.
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- Oh but of course, wouldn't be right if she didn't show up soon
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- yeah, it's mom birthday after all.
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- ok, update #2.
- I think I am 20% or 30% done with this
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- not bad so far
- the only thing that irks me are the typos and grammar errors
- it's really only minor though, it's not that big a deal for most people, it just messes with my head since english isn't my native language
- otherwise, i like where you're heading with this story
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- >not bad so far
- >the only thing that irks me are the typos and grammar errors
- >it's really only minor though, it's not that big a deal for most people, it just messes with my head since english isn't my native language
- same here, I am thinking asking one of my friend to help me to fix the typos and grammar errors but idk if they watch mao mao or not.
- >otherwise, i like where you're heading with this story
- thanks pal
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- I like it so far, the grammatical and punctuation stuff can be dealt with later on and personally the flow could be tweaked on a couple parts imo but tis enjoyable.
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- thank pal, I am going to take a break and add more of it tomorrow.
- it's 5:02 PM, i should get some food.
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- Always a good idea to get food and relax periodically from writing, else you'll become braindead.
- And you're CST as well? 5:07 atm over here.
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- >And you're CST as well? 5:07 atm over here.
- yeah, you live in TX like me?
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- As a matter of fact I do lol
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- >As a matter of fact I do lol
- yay, TX bros
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- Fk yeah lol
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- That fking smug bas ard
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- hm... should I add him into a story as a one-off or something?... like later on.
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- Hmm possibly later on? Might not fit appropriately or something, but eh
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- yeah it's a big maybe
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