The Fable of Wren

More notable bits of poetic prose, little too reliant on "I" statements, though.
Bird story had lovely gender notes.
Wren's got a strong character voice and they're an asshole!
Wren-Jethro's relationship is a little rushed.
Intrusive gender questions = realism!
Misgiving from family, but without realizing it and correcting.
Small-town bigotry, cowardly though.

Everyone's a person who has complexity and flaws and fucks up.

One spelling mistakes. Two commas side-by-side. Lack of a comma in a dialogue.

The best of the lot, a complex nonbinary protagonist dealing with grief and loss, trying to let people in and fucking up on it.