So this one is for Rites of Passage - we've written for them in the past. You're familiar with this guys and have background info and context.

For this one, we'll be announcing the opening of registration for their Equinox Wilderness Quest.

Details are in the note and previous article you'll get.

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Note: Rites of Passage

Program: Equinox Wilderness Quest: Ritual and Ecology

Sept 19 - sept 27

Details about the trip:

This nine-day Wilderness Quest will be held in the Inyo Mountains, a remote high desert range that is a place of silence, beauty, and wildness. This is a drive-in base camp, requiring a high clearance vehicle, preferably 4 wheel drive.

Occurring over the autumnal equinox, this Wilderness Quest offers a chance to slow down and experience the changing of the seasons within and around you.

Alongside the traditional Wilderness Quest structure, this program invites us to experience the wilderness more intimately through practices of observation, attention, tracking, inquiry, and ritual.

help us mark and make meaning of transitions in our lives, and uncover insights into our unique gifts, questions, and longings.

Rites of Passage has offered the Wilderness Quest, with its roots in pan-cultural ceremonies and teachings, for over 45 years. With a focus on reconnecting with nature, finding authentic depth and meaning, healing old wounds, and  marking significant life changes, the program will appeal to men and women in any life stage

DAYS 1-3: Preparation

The first 3 days are Severance or preparation time for the solo.  Meeting in Council sessions, the group will explore a range of subjects related to the Wilderness Quest solo, including safety-related issues: flora/fauna, weather-related concerns (heat, cold, lightning), essential first aid, our buddy system, and tarp-tying.  The group will also explore eco-spiritual tools that can be of great value in preparing, such as the Medicine Wheel teachings, exploration of Intent and purpose, self-generated ceremonial practices, and teachings from the Death Lodge. Group members will have several hours to follow their calling to find a solo site to hold them in the wilderness for days and nights.

DAYS 4-6: Solo

You will have three days of time in the liminal world or Spirit world, held by the land and the wider community of life around you.  This is time to let go, heal, reflect, write in your journal, sing, dance, laugh, weep, call in the life awaiting you, mark your passage with ceremony.

DAYS 7-9: Return

The final 3 days, following the return from the solo, will be devoted to taking the necessary steps of return or Incorporation in a fully conscious way. This process begins with a Council session where each participant has the opportunity to tell the story of their Wilderness Quest solo and to receive essential feedback and confirmation from staff regarding what has been achieved.

What you should know:

We’ll schedule an online pre-trip meeting about a month before the quest begins to review gear, logistics, and transportation and a follow-up online meeting about a month after it ends, to support participants on their journeys.

Program Fee*
To make this quest more accessible, we’re offering it on a sliding scale of $1,200–$2,550.

Why come?
nature-base

healing and renewal

 - processing grief
 - overcoming past trauma
 - working through personal loss

Program Elements
Solitude: Spending days alone in nature with minimal shelter.
Fasting: Abstaining from food during the solo period to heighten focus and introspection.
Community: Sharing experiences and gaining validation from a small group of peers before and after the solo.

vision quest trip

Company overview:

For four decades, Rites of Passage has been helping people of all cultures and walks of life find meaning and purpose by reconnecting with nature, practicing solitude, and engaging in deep self-reflection. Inspired by the traditional vision quest, a rite of passage present in many Native American tribes, their Wilderness Quest was designed to help people achieve personal insights or clarity about their purpose in life.

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Previous article: California Wilderness Quest September 2026: Retreat Bookings Announced

Rites of Passage opens registration for its 9-day Equinox Wilderness Quest program, September 19-27, 2026, in California's Inyo Mountains. The retreat features a three-day solo wilderness experience focused on personal transformation and nature immersion.

Rites of Passage has announced bookings for its 2026 Equinox Wilderness Quest, scheduled for September 19-27 in California’s remote Inyo Mountains. Open to adults of all genders and backgrounds, the nine-day experience is centered on the autumn equinox, using wilderness immersion, ritual, and reflective practice to help participants engage more consciously with periods of personal change.

More information can be found at https://wildernessquest.org/schedule/equinox-quest-2026/

With one in six people worldwide experiencing loneliness, according to a 2025 World Health Organization report, the need for meaningful connections has come into sharper focus. Research published in Scientific Reports also found that spending at least 120 minutes a week in nature was associated with better health and well-being. Wilderness quests bridge this gap by combining extended nature immersion and intentional solitude with a return to community, helping participants integrate reflection into their relationships and daily lives.

The upcoming Equinox Wilderness Quest brings these elements together within a structured nine-day experience. Rites of Passage notes that the program follows a three-part arc of preparation, solo immersion, and return. During the opening phase, Council sessions address practical considerations, including local flora and fauna, weather risks, essential first aid, a buddy system, and tarp tying. Participants also explore eco-spiritual practices, such as Medicine Wheel teachings, intention and purpose, self-generated ceremonies, and Death Lodge teachings, before selecting a solo site.

A three-day solo period follows, creating space for reflection, journaling, observation, and personal ceremony away from everyday routines. After returning, participants rejoin the group for Council sessions, where they share their experiences and receive feedback from program staff during the final integration phase.

The 2026 program also incorporates observation, tracking, inquiry, and ritual to deepen participants’ connection with place and the wider living world.

The quest will be guided by Dashielle Vawter, a coach, minister, singer-songwriter, wilderness quest guide, and mountain guide, alongside Daniel Francis, a regenerative designer, educator, rites-of-passage guide, storyteller, musician, and tracker.

The program starts in California’s Owens Valley and includes six nights in the backcountry. The organization, which has offered wilderness-based rites of passage for over 45 years, is also offering one reduced-fee scholarship at $1,450 and two additional scholarships at $1,850, available by advance inquiry.

Those interested can find booking details and additional program information at https://wildernessquest.org/schedule/equinox-quest-2026/

This is the story we want to tell:

People experiencing major life transitions now have an opportunity to step away from everyday life and reflect on those changes through a structured wilderness experience.

"Modern life offers few opportunities to intentionally acknowledge the moments that separate one stage of life from another."

"Major life changes often arrive without a clear point to pause, reflect, and decide what comes next."

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experiencing a major life change
entering a new stage of life
moving through a period of transition
facing a significant change
after receiving a diagnosis
during the recovery period
as they return to throwing
following a diagnosis
taking the next step after...
making sense of...
deciding what comes next
working through...
responding to...
adjusting to...
marking a transition