Tayter_Kat

markyPants

Aug 16th, 2015
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  1. Hello MarkyPants, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You gave a structure but its missing depth. depth is the layers within a structure. You can add depth by incorporating slabs, buttons, trap doors, fences, and stairs. If you need a visual of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees and animals. Your trees are good enough for the initiate rank, so great job!
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. You have different levels of terrain, but it is flat within the levels. If you can figure out a way to add some hills , craters, etc. to these levels you would be golden!!!
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  10. Fix the things mentioned above and your good to go!
  11. Good Luck<3
  12. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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