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R*Novice Review: allijac

May 29th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. Very cute temple but theres a few things i think you should work on before you rank up!
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  5. Greek is an interesting style because they structures are very straight forward but theres small detailing in everything, so make sure you detail the structure appropriately with stairs, slabs, fences or what have you. I see theres some detail but make sure theres a tad more :)
  6. If the temple is to Poseidon, you might want to incorporate some more themes to go along with that. Perhaps a statue of him, maybe a trident or some designs that sorta mimic the sea.
  7. Since the structure takes up most of the plot i wont pester you with terrain, but the trees need to be bigger, and fluff the leaves out a bit more to make it more tree like! Add some air in to your brush to give it a leafy feeling :)
  8. Some more height on the build might be good too. Just a wee bit taller :)
  9. Good luck!
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