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[Satyr] Tag (Lyra/Anon)

Sep 11th, 2013
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  18. >"Dad! Could I go outside and play?"
  19. >You look at your daughter, eagerly waiting for your answer.
  20. Finished your homework?
  21. >Hope whips out her homework from behind her back.
  22. >There's two pages.
  23. >Math and English.
  24. >You check Hope's math first.
  25. >A few eraser marks here and there, but the answers are all correct.
  26. >English now.
  27. >She seems to struggle on the subject, however, everything seems to be in order.
  28. Well, well, good j-
  29. >As you raise your head, Hope is nowhere to be seen.
  30. >Apparently, she already left the house.
  31. >"Let's go, Dad!"
  32. >You set Hope's homework down, put on your shoes, and head out the door.
  33. Hope, what are you doing? Isn't your mom supposed to watch you?
  34. >"She's asleep!"
  35. >Whoops.
  36. >You just remembered Lyra is taking a nap.
  37. >It seems you'll have to watch her today.
  38. >Not that you mind though.
  39. >"Dad! Go to the center!"
  40. >Center?
  41. >She must mean the grassy area where she and the foals play.
  42. >It serves as a mini play area.
  43. >You head to the center and wait.
  44. >Soon after, the sound of hooves stomping the ground catches your attention.
  45. >Hope has gathered the neighborhood foals.
  46. >You can't remember their names even if it saved your life.
  47. >There's the pink filly not much older than Hope.
  48. >Two gray colts.
  49. >One is two years younger than his brother.
  50. >The other is close to Hope's age.
  51. >And last but not least, the white filly.
  52. >She has a quiet personality, and she always looks up to Hope, like a big sister.
  53. >Hope raises her arms into the sky.
  54. >"OK! Who's going to be the one?"
  55. >None of the foals say anything.
  56. >"Aw... do I have to be it again?"
  57. >Hope looks at you.
  58. >An idea sparks in her mind.
  59. >She points to you.
  60. >"Dad! You should be it!"
  61. It?
  62. >"Yeah!"
  63. >You're completely baffled.
  64. What do you mean?
  65. >"Chase us, Dad! Try and catch every one of us!"
  66. >Your daughter and the foals scramble away, giving you little time to react.
  67. >They run to the other side.
  68. >You pursue after them.
  69. >However, as soon as you could catch the white filly, Hope stops you.
  70. >"Stop!"
  71. Huh?
  72. >"Dad! You can't past the line! That's the rule!"
  73. Line?
  74. >Hope points to the ground near your feet.
  75. >"There!"
  76. >It appears that there's an invisible line that prevents the tagger from entering.
  77. >You step back and await for their next move.
  78. >"You have to count five seconds..."
  79. >The white filly's voice barely reaches your ears.
  80. OK, OK!
  81. >The group dashes to the other side.
  82. 1
  83. 2
  84. 3
  85. 4
  86. 5
  87. >You sprint quickly, sending your legs into overdrive.
  88. >The first to fall is the young gray colt followed by his brother.
  89. >The rest split off, knowing they will be caught if they continued straight.
  90. >Hope is near the safe zone, but you blocked off her access to it.
  91. >Going after Hope will let the two fillies plot the next run.
  92. >Your daughter knows you will go all out.
  93. >You make a break for the pink filly, however, you feint and tag the white filly, surprising her.
  94. >It doesn't take much to bring down the pink one, but Hope is safe.
  95. >"Revive!"
  96. >The foals gather to the safe zone.
  97. What the...?
  98. >Hope giggles.
  99. >"If the last survivor enters the safe zone, everyone is back!"
  100. >You're astounded.
  101. >These rules are a pain.
  102. >It's time to get serious!
  103. >Round 2!
  104. >In spite of giving it your all, your efforts are in vain as the group becomes trickier to catch.
  105. >Hope's in the safe zone again.
  106. >Round 3.
  107. >Again, you failed.
  108. >The young gray colt somehow made it to the safe zone.
  109. >Round 4...
  110. >Breathing heavily now.
  111. >The white filly is the current winner.
  112. >Hope has a smug look on her face.
  113. >A bitter feeling creeps up.
  114. >You're not going down easily.
  115. >No way!
  116. >NO HOW!
  117. >Round 5!
  118. >The group silently waits for you to count.
  119. >They have no idea what's on your mind.
  120. >Your foot barely steps over the "line."
  121. >"Dad! You're over the line!"
  122. >You smirk.
  123. >Hope's eyes bug out.
  124. >She knows what you're up to.
  125. >"Dad! You have to follow the rules!"
  126. Hohoho! But I'm an adult.
  127. >You invade the safe zone, breaking the rules.
  128. Adults don't follow the rules!
  129. >Hope rushes forward and rams against your chest.
  130. >"Stop him! Shove him back!"
  131. >The rest help, but their combined strength cannot stop you.
  132. >You move inch by inch.
  133. >It is inevitable.
  134. >The war will end.
  135. HA HA HA! You cannot match the power of an ADULT!
  136. >Hope locks on your leg and pulls while the foals keep pushing.
  137. >You've become an awakened beast.
  138. ROOOOOAAAR!
  139. >You advance easily.
  140. >This is it.
  141. >You have won.
  142. >However, Hope takes one last gamble.
  143. >She bites your leg.
  144. OW!
  145. >You stumble forward, causing everybody to fall.
  146. >Your body smacks onto the grass.
  147. >Hope is still hanging onto your leg.
  148. >But it's too late.
  149. >Game over.
  150. >Just then, Hope starts to laugh.
  151. >The foals also join in.
  152. >"Hehehe! Did you see my dad fall? He was like a tree! Bam!"
  153. >Despite losing, your daughter and the foals had a fun time.
  154. >Laughter fills the air as you stare at the blue skies.
  155. >The laughter dies down as the foals' names are called out to return home.
  156. >This is your chance to remember their names, but you're too tired to do so.
  157. >You and Hope are the only ones left.
  158. >She blocks your view and smiles.
  159. Hope, did you have to bite me?
  160. >"Yeah! You were going to win!"
  161. >She doesn't hold that statement back.
  162. Well, you tried, but you knew what would happen. Dad always goes all out.
  163. >"Next time, Dad! We'll win!"
  164. >You laugh.
  165. Oh? Are you sure?
  166. >"Mmhmm! We'll definitely beat the rule breaker!"
  167. Then you'll have face the SPIRIT OF AN ADULT! HAH!
  168. >You raise both arms and one leg into the air.
  169. >The other leg won't respond.
  170. >...
  171. >Uh oh.
  172. Hope, could you get your mom?
  173. >Hope notices the pain twisting on your face.
  174. >"OK!"
  175. >She runs to the house, yelling.
  176. >"MOOOOOOOM!"
  177. >You slowly sit up, massaging your strained leg.
  178. >In the corner of your eye, you see a mint pony.
  179. >Lyra has watched you the entire time from the balcony.
  180. >Wasn't she napping?
  181. >It probably doesn't matter now.
  182. >The smile on her face won't disappear.
  183. >You wave to her and point to your leg.
  184. >Lyra gives a small nod and turns around as soon as Hope shows up.
  185. >As you wait, you wonder what the next day will bring for you and your family.
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