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- >"Dad! Could I go outside and play?"
- >You look at your daughter, eagerly waiting for your answer.
- Finished your homework?
- >Hope whips out her homework from behind her back.
- >There's two pages.
- >Math and English.
- >You check Hope's math first.
- >A few eraser marks here and there, but the answers are all correct.
- >English now.
- >She seems to struggle on the subject, however, everything seems to be in order.
- Well, well, good j-
- >As you raise your head, Hope is nowhere to be seen.
- >Apparently, she already left the house.
- >"Let's go, Dad!"
- >You set Hope's homework down, put on your shoes, and head out the door.
- Hope, what are you doing? Isn't your mom supposed to watch you?
- >"She's asleep!"
- >Whoops.
- >You just remembered Lyra is taking a nap.
- >It seems you'll have to watch her today.
- >Not that you mind though.
- >"Dad! Go to the center!"
- >Center?
- >She must mean the grassy area where she and the foals play.
- >It serves as a mini play area.
- >You head to the center and wait.
- >Soon after, the sound of hooves stomping the ground catches your attention.
- >Hope has gathered the neighborhood foals.
- >You can't remember their names even if it saved your life.
- >There's the pink filly not much older than Hope.
- >Two gray colts.
- >One is two years younger than his brother.
- >The other is close to Hope's age.
- >And last but not least, the white filly.
- >She has a quiet personality, and she always looks up to Hope, like a big sister.
- >Hope raises her arms into the sky.
- >"OK! Who's going to be the one?"
- >None of the foals say anything.
- >"Aw... do I have to be it again?"
- >Hope looks at you.
- >An idea sparks in her mind.
- >She points to you.
- >"Dad! You should be it!"
- It?
- >"Yeah!"
- >You're completely baffled.
- What do you mean?
- >"Chase us, Dad! Try and catch every one of us!"
- >Your daughter and the foals scramble away, giving you little time to react.
- >They run to the other side.
- >You pursue after them.
- >However, as soon as you could catch the white filly, Hope stops you.
- >"Stop!"
- Huh?
- >"Dad! You can't past the line! That's the rule!"
- Line?
- >Hope points to the ground near your feet.
- >"There!"
- >It appears that there's an invisible line that prevents the tagger from entering.
- >You step back and await for their next move.
- >"You have to count five seconds..."
- >The white filly's voice barely reaches your ears.
- OK, OK!
- >The group dashes to the other side.
- 1
- 2
- 3
- 4
- 5
- >You sprint quickly, sending your legs into overdrive.
- >The first to fall is the young gray colt followed by his brother.
- >The rest split off, knowing they will be caught if they continued straight.
- >Hope is near the safe zone, but you blocked off her access to it.
- >Going after Hope will let the two fillies plot the next run.
- >Your daughter knows you will go all out.
- >You make a break for the pink filly, however, you feint and tag the white filly, surprising her.
- >It doesn't take much to bring down the pink one, but Hope is safe.
- >"Revive!"
- >The foals gather to the safe zone.
- What the...?
- >Hope giggles.
- >"If the last survivor enters the safe zone, everyone is back!"
- >You're astounded.
- >These rules are a pain.
- >It's time to get serious!
- >Round 2!
- >In spite of giving it your all, your efforts are in vain as the group becomes trickier to catch.
- >Hope's in the safe zone again.
- >Round 3.
- >Again, you failed.
- >The young gray colt somehow made it to the safe zone.
- >Round 4...
- >Breathing heavily now.
- >The white filly is the current winner.
- >Hope has a smug look on her face.
- >A bitter feeling creeps up.
- >You're not going down easily.
- >No way!
- >NO HOW!
- >Round 5!
- >The group silently waits for you to count.
- >They have no idea what's on your mind.
- >Your foot barely steps over the "line."
- >"Dad! You're over the line!"
- >You smirk.
- >Hope's eyes bug out.
- >She knows what you're up to.
- >"Dad! You have to follow the rules!"
- Hohoho! But I'm an adult.
- >You invade the safe zone, breaking the rules.
- Adults don't follow the rules!
- >Hope rushes forward and rams against your chest.
- >"Stop him! Shove him back!"
- >The rest help, but their combined strength cannot stop you.
- >You move inch by inch.
- >It is inevitable.
- >The war will end.
- HA HA HA! You cannot match the power of an ADULT!
- >Hope locks on your leg and pulls while the foals keep pushing.
- >You've become an awakened beast.
- ROOOOOAAAR!
- >You advance easily.
- >This is it.
- >You have won.
- >However, Hope takes one last gamble.
- >She bites your leg.
- OW!
- >You stumble forward, causing everybody to fall.
- >Your body smacks onto the grass.
- >Hope is still hanging onto your leg.
- >But it's too late.
- >Game over.
- >Just then, Hope starts to laugh.
- >The foals also join in.
- >"Hehehe! Did you see my dad fall? He was like a tree! Bam!"
- >Despite losing, your daughter and the foals had a fun time.
- >Laughter fills the air as you stare at the blue skies.
- >The laughter dies down as the foals' names are called out to return home.
- >This is your chance to remember their names, but you're too tired to do so.
- >You and Hope are the only ones left.
- >She blocks your view and smiles.
- Hope, did you have to bite me?
- >"Yeah! You were going to win!"
- >She doesn't hold that statement back.
- Well, you tried, but you knew what would happen. Dad always goes all out.
- >"Next time, Dad! We'll win!"
- >You laugh.
- Oh? Are you sure?
- >"Mmhmm! We'll definitely beat the rule breaker!"
- Then you'll have face the SPIRIT OF AN ADULT! HAH!
- >You raise both arms and one leg into the air.
- >The other leg won't respond.
- >...
- >Uh oh.
- Hope, could you get your mom?
- >Hope notices the pain twisting on your face.
- >"OK!"
- >She runs to the house, yelling.
- >"MOOOOOOOM!"
- >You slowly sit up, massaging your strained leg.
- >In the corner of your eye, you see a mint pony.
- >Lyra has watched you the entire time from the balcony.
- >Wasn't she napping?
- >It probably doesn't matter now.
- >The smile on her face won't disappear.
- >You wave to her and point to your leg.
- >Lyra gives a small nod and turns around as soon as Hope shows up.
- >As you wait, you wonder what the next day will bring for you and your family.
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