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- Ultimate Tank 2.4
- [38]
- Hm...? Wasn't Brunn Queluz the country where the personwho possessed the "Judgement" skill died a few years ago...?
- Hm...? Wasn't Brunn Queluz the country where the person who had the "Judgement" skill died a few years ago...?
- [-m] Possessed is used 3 times in a row in each sentence, so I think it'd to change it once/twice to lower repetitivity.
- And Luna, the Homunculus who was illegally made in that country, possesses the "Judgement" skill...
- And Luna, the Homunculus who was illegally made in that country, also has the "Judgement" skill...
- [39]
- In regards to the production of Homunculi, there are a few things I know even though I'm not really well-versed with it.
- In regards to the production of Homunculi, there are a few things I know of even though I'm not really familiar with it.
- as a result of the neighbouring country trying to reproduce the valuable skill "Judgement" with Homunculi, since they didn't want to lose it...
- as a result of the neighbouring country trying to reproduce the valuable skill "Judgement" with a Homunculus, since they didn't want to lose it...
- [40]
- Actually, I noticed Luna was a Homunculus the moment I coincidentally saw the magical jewel when we first met.
- Actually when we first met, I noticed Luna was a Homunculus when I coincidentally saw the magical jewel.
- [41]
- Luna's eyes when I met her looked the same as Manicia's from the time, so... I couldn't abandon you.
- When I met you, your eyes had the same look as Manicia's from back then, so... I couldn't abandon you.
- [42]
- Won't you convey me your feelings, Luna?
- Won't you tell me your feelings, Luna?
- [43]
- as fellow comrades with mutually unclear desires?
- as comrades with mutually unclear desires?
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