Tayter_Kat

LAUZZ13

Jun 27th, 2015
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  1. Hello LAUZZ13, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to shopping stalls. You don't have a structure on your plot, so try to add one somewhere. Add depth to the building as well. Depth is the layers in a that make it seem more realistic. Depth is created by trap doors, stairs, slabs, fences, and buttons. You can use those to a side of almost anything to give it some detail and depth.
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  6. Terrain:
  7. This is the ground you walk on, but also includes cliffs and hills etc. Your terrain, with the walk way, is flat. You can extend the cliffs to make an entrance instead of a pathway. The cave walk are very boxy as well. Try smoothing is out more to make it more realistic.
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  9. Organics:
  10. The hand-made trees are a plus, nut the leaves are to close to the ground. try making the tree a bit taller to make it look like a tree instead of a husky bush. Also, you can add more of them around the plot to fill the empty spaces, along with the structure of course.
  11. Good Luck<3
  12. -Tayter_Kat
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