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  1. Hey there!
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  3. So first off your terrain.
  4. It's very flat - the grass areas you have are very simple, and not creative, as there's no variety to it. You have a river running around in a circle, which is really cute. I like that detail in the terrain but you're going to need to add some diversity to the levels on the inside - similar to what you've done on the corners of the plot.
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  6. Secondly, organics. It's safe to say you have a lot of them, but they're all spawned trees! We don't accept spawned trees on this server - it's too easy, and one of the most un-creative things you can do :c Please build your own. If you struggle with them, I suggest you search 'Plutouthere' on YouTube and watch his tutorials :)
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  8. Lastly, structure. It's way too simple. I can see you understand how to detail something, but you need more of it. I'd also suggest not making it entirely out of quarts - it's going to need some colour to it, maybe a stained clay of sorts. It'd also be nice if it was a little bigger :3
  9. I like the bridge though! But the wood is a little strange with the quarts :p
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  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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