DuttYGilberT

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Feb 15th, 2015
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  1. Hey there :3
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  3. So your terrain is really good. I can see you've leveled it out a little bit, so it's no longer so jagged.
  4. Your structures don't really work on this terrain. The style is kind of futuristic looking, which you show no other relation to in any other part of your plot. As well, you have no atmosphere, so the buildings look out of place, just on the plot, no reason to them. I think you need to decide on a theme.
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  6. Lastly, your organics. The trees are okay; they have a good trunk, if not a few too many blocks used for the roots. And the shape of the leaves is too triangular. I see you took out the circular aspect to the leaves like I asked in the last review, but you've gone a completely different route to the one I was aiming for.
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  8. Try looking at this guys YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCLUKySjsOfU9jcjYyFJWk2A/videos (Plutouthere)
  9. He's a good friend of mine, and is well known for making fantastic trees!
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  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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