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- Hey there! :3
- Firstly, terrain. You have lovely terrain! I'm really loving the palette, although I'm not too keen on when people leave out grass from the palette! I feel like grass is a really needed block in terrain, unless you're going full on fantasy, just because of the detail you can add (Like grass, flowers, ferns, etc.) <--- These additions really add to the atmosphere of a plot easily, and fill spaces on the plot that may be difficult to fill. However, because this plot has an Elven theme, I think it's fine how it is. It just would be nice in the small spots that are hard to fill!
- Secondly, organics. I love your trees! I really like how you've used different coloured wood types in the trunks - it looks really interesting! They all have a nice shape, and work well on the plot where you've placed them! I think the roots need to be a little shorter, however. They're too long in some places! On the side of the mountain, it works. But on the flat land, it doesn't work too well cx
- There are some areas on the plot where you could have more, or you could have some other organic plants, like flowers, or water organics (reeds, cattails etc).
- Lastly, structure. You have a great amount of structure on this plot and it all looks lovely! I love the Elven theme; Elven is a style I enjoy a lot myself :3
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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