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oRyan's Aspirant Review

Jul 8th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. You have lovely terrain! I'm really loving the palette, although I'm not too keen on when people leave out grass from the palette! I feel like grass is a really needed block in terrain, unless you're going full on fantasy, just because of the detail you can add (Like grass, flowers, ferns, etc.) <--- These additions really add to the atmosphere of a plot easily, and fill spaces on the plot that may be difficult to fill. However, because this plot has an Elven theme, I think it's fine how it is. It just would be nice in the small spots that are hard to fill!
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  5. Secondly, organics. I love your trees! I really like how you've used different coloured wood types in the trunks - it looks really interesting! They all have a nice shape, and work well on the plot where you've placed them! I think the roots need to be a little shorter, however. They're too long in some places! On the side of the mountain, it works. But on the flat land, it doesn't work too well cx
  6. There are some areas on the plot where you could have more, or you could have some other organic plants, like flowers, or water organics (reeds, cattails etc).
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  8. Lastly, structure. You have a great amount of structure on this plot and it all looks lovely! I love the Elven theme; Elven is a style I enjoy a lot myself :3
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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