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- Prose is both full of Internet speak and too formal in its grammar. Also, bad grammar.
- Oh my god, the teenage speak is so fucking... probably realistic, but ugggh.
- Dylan is kind of okay for a teenager, but their head is interminable.
- Dylan and Lou work better as friends, but I do like their friendship.
- That being said, Dylan is such a comics person.
- Too many fucking memes will date this book.
- First person POV's not the best-written. Who says "I think" in a tight first-person?
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