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  1. Madison just got in a fight and stormed out.
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  3. Diana's a little shaken, both from the aggressiveness of the confrontation, but also due to slight projection on her part. In the context of a party, it'd be easy to project (the cheerleader) onto Madison, and through collateral, (the jock) onto Forrest. Since she'd usually hang around them during parties like this, alongside already still being in that fragile-ish state, she feels like the rug just got yanked out of her. We LIKELY want to have Madi snap at Di a little more harshly, just maybe not straight for salt in the wound.)
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  5. Forrest takes her to the car, sits her down, and comforts her before anything else. Gives her a second to breathe/chill out, maybe turns the radio on low so it's not an awkward silence, likely trots back in. He can come back with something to eat (and maybe drink) and basically let her wind down. Gives her a little peptalk, maybe they talk a little about how everyone has baggage.
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  7. Bite discussion lead in can probs be him saying that he still needs to eat but wants her to get home safe and how there's always an after party to the after party, worst case, etc.
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  9. She says she's still fine with a bite, he asks her once more for affirmation, and then we just re-use what we have.
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  12. Meta stuff:
  13. ((Recommended intro potentially, just because di going "yeah there was a fight" doesn't quite have the same communication as showing the tail end of the mess. see below)
  14. Part of the prologue (the madi trail in specif should probs mention "haha yeah uh. bad fight, and then..."
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  16. <STUDENT A>
  17. I know it’s hard, Madison. Really. I know perfectly well what it’s like to have a princess complex, thinking everyone has to follow my rules or they’re worthless wastes of space.
  18. Oh, wait.
  19. No, I fucking don’t! Because I care about others!
  20. But sure, keep sucking Fitzgerald’s dick until it falls off his corpse, okay?
  21. If you ever feel like apologising, I blocked you on text, but hey. You know my email, bitch.
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  23. And then Madison whirls around, our eyes meeting.
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  25. My breath hitches—her eyes are red-rimmed.
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  27. DIANA
  28. Madi?
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  30. But then since there's 500+ words of fretting around the party before Forrest and Di even get close to talking about bite there should probs be some trimming and/or rearranging specif for the demo if not for the whole.))
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