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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but there some things i think you should work on before ranking up!
- First, your terrain isnt exactly the smoothest. Have it transition better in to the sand and maybe try to make it smoother. I can see some w-e spheres in the terrain so do that care of those!
- The structure seems a bit weak, and theres some room behind it, so you could possibly start to add more to it and make walls and turn it in to a real structure. Its a good start though.
- The organics are good, but if youre playing to thr organics in the plot, make sure they at least make sense! For instance, a snail isnt as big as a tree, and a shark isnt bigger than a tree :p
- Give your plot some continuity and keep at it!
- Good luck!
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