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BlockGamer1's Initiate Review

Jun 17th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, I'd like to say I do like the idea behind this plot. It's nice and original, however you don't have anything that really shows tooooo many skills. By that, I mean that everything you've made is pretty simple!
  4. If you could include some more structure that shows more detailing/depth, and isn't all made completely from oak wood, I think personally it would be good to go!
  5. I think you also need a little more terrain around the edges, because the whole plot is flat - where you have the flowers, maybe just raise some of that flat terrain, by making some small hills etc.
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  7. Good luck!
  8. - Dutty :3
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