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Destroyer0107's Initiate Review

Jun 14th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. It's completely flat - you're going to need to raise some areas of it. As you already have a lot built on it, your best bet is to make some small hills in some of the areas. I think I'd just like to see some of that before you rank up!
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  5. Secondly, organics. Your trees are okay; you could thin out the trunks a little - and your tree in front of the nether portal needs some roots like the other tree!
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  7. Lastly, structure. All your structures are okay, but some need to go/need to be improved. Firstly, the one in the air isn't really needed on the plot, and I feel like looks super out of place. It also has no depth/detail and so is adding nothing to the plot as a whole. As well, the small house needs improvement in the roof. I would suggest using full blocks instead of slabs!
  8. Also, the nether portal needs to go. Again, it adds nothing to the plot, and because it's vanilla, is way too uncreative and shouldn't be on the plot! If you made the portal in a slightly more creative shape, and used purple glass to simulate the portal effects, then that'd be better!
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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