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- Novice Review:
- Cute plot but theres some stuff you should work on before you can rank
- The structure is a little too plain and a bit random. Try to make it more like how you picture a house would look like! Add different layers to the walls to create depth and detail it with stairs, slabs, fences etc. Theres also only one house on the plot, so i would like you to add much more, weather it be houses, towers, castles, or whatever you want. As long as theres more structure!
- The terrain is a stone box in the corner of the plot right now, so try and bring the terrain through the plot. Add mountains, cliffs, ravines, hills, whatever you want! As long as theres more. Theres a lot of flat space to work with so im sure that you'll be able to come up with something!
- The tree is very boxy. The trunk is too thin for how many leaves there are and the leaves look like boxes. Have a look around at other plots that have trees and notice how the trunks are thicker and the leaves are more fluffy and roundish. If you dont know the command to do that, try holding a stick in your hand and do (//mask air) then do (//br sphere leaves 3). That should give you a sphere brush of leaves with the size of 3! This also works for terrain, if you do (//br sphere stone 3) then you will get a brush with stone! Try it out! :)
- Good luck!
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