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- Hello ImTommy!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I would first like to state that the idea for your plot is a very creative one, but was executed poorly. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure's house has some decent depth to it, but the roof is a little flat and looks slabby. Try to make it rise up more and use blocks instead of slabs. Add some more detailing to your walls and incorporate your glowstone in a way so it doesn't look awkward. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help.
- The trees on your plot look like default trees, so remove them and start all over with custom trees. Dont forget to add the branches and the roots.
- Your terrain is really flat and i know they're purposely suppose to look that way based off your idea but still. Try to make it look like the terrains are fused together instead of sticking on a stone cube. Add some block variation such as green clay, cobblestone, gravel, etc to the grass portion and the rest of your terrain.
- Your plot is really unique and creative but you need to put more work into it before I can rank u up. It sucks a little since your space is limited. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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