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Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Yes finally !
Suika: Welcome to the dark dimension! ... Just kidding, it's just a field.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I don t know what s up w this high grass but I assume that there are drugs
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: And this place is cool
Suika: Yes, sure.
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Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: So what s the first lesson
Suika: There you are.
TatyCullen: Loading
Suika: Now, I already know how her posts look - but you, sure, I want to see what a post from you looks like so I know where you are standing.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I never rped
TatyCullen: I have a anime school
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Never ever I do not know rules
TatyCullen: Class*
TatyCullen: Little lagging in here
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I was put in low table role sooo that means I have to improve my skills
Suika: The rules should be common sense - Autohits are not allowed, i.e. "slams his punch into her face before she could react" rather go for "He would swing his fist in the direction of her face, aiming to connect before she could react."
TatyCullen: What role are you
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Guard
TatyCullen: That's low ? Servant low
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Now I m confused I will ss so I can read it multiple times till it makes sense in my head
Suika: It's about how you write it.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: So auto hit
Suika: Also, Octavia, do you have a pc?
Suika: Right, Autohit is a no-no.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Is something like a blockage
TatyCullen: Yes but I have to fix it at the moment will be back up in3 weeks
Suika: Autohit is when you force a hit on someone without their permission
TatyCullen: Don't worry I can keep up on my phone
Suika: I see. Alright, when you have it up, download Grammarly. It will help you with your writing on pc.
Suika: I think they have a mobile app as well you can use.
Suika: It'll help kill misspellings and punctuation.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Hmm
TatyCullen: Ooh I heard about it yes I suck at those two
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: So
TatyCullen: This room lagging lol
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: How should I continue
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: For ex
Suika: If you think it will help you as well with your writing, you may get it as well, Tudor.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: /me goes to the hallway and grabs my abdomen the pain killing me .....etc
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: From there I do not know what to do
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Put the point and then continue another proposition?
Suika: You have to come up with your own, add some details.
Suika: What are you doing? What is the pain like? Are there people around you?
Suika: It's like writing a story.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I suck at story telling
Suika: That's okay. Practice makes perfect.
Suika: Expand your imagination.
TatyCullen  Breathing deeply until her fingers start to curl up into a ball so tightly the women's knuckles start turning paste-white , before her legs stand inches apart waiting for the women's next attempt her right arm limps down a little more then her left as she can tell the women lightning shooted far deeper then she anticipated. Her burnt tissue sent a unpleasant smell to her nostrils as she flares them taking in the scent ,still glaring at her target.she begins to feel the females Mana getting ready for another attack she can tell this attack was far greater than her previous ones she runs allowing her weak arm to face the other direction trying not to make it obvious how much excruciating pain she was in her palms faces out straightening out behind her as if in blade .Alllowing her to increase her speed with each step ....I Never finished alot of typos
Suika: Octavia, if it helps, you can write in another app. I think Grammarly has a writing section in the app.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Damn
Suika: It'll also help you keep track of your writing.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I can t even start one
Suika: It's okay, Tudor.
Suika: I used to be the same way when I was younger.
TatyCullen: Okays can you help me find the write app later
Suika: But I also read more books, mangas, watched anime a lot to help for ideas and increase my imagination.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: My mind is like "aaaaaaa" when I see all of you typing those long phrases so fast
Suika: Do you have an iphone or some other phone?
TatyCullen: Plus Tudor I'm on phone which why I have to learn from the beginning
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Samsung s10
TatyCullen: Android
Suika: Alright
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Eh same shit
Suika: I can send you the app link via discord
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Alright
TatyCullen: I watch anime to help alittle like sensei said
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: It s just
Suika: I know.
Suika: It's overwhelming.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: My mind concentrates on the action on only two verbes at one time
Suika: That's why we will take it step by step.
Suika: Hm... I'll make this easy. Tudor, what anime have you seen?
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Diabolik lovers
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Conan
TatyCullen: Ooh yess
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Harem anime
Suika: Alright, take a fighting scene you remember from either of those animes.
TatyCullen: Diabolik I have watched that's easy
Suika: Actually
Suika: Better yet
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Hmm
Suika: Octavia, pick a random scene from Diabolik Lovers.
TatyCullen: Can we do a scene from one
TatyCullen: Ooh okay
TatyCullen: Umm
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I used to like so damn much corpse party
Suika: I want you two to re-enact it. This will help with your writing.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Oh jesus
Suika: You don't have to rush into your writing, by the way.
TatyCullen: Okay tubor pick one of the brothers
Suika: Take your time writing your post, and take turns.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Someone told me I m more of an Ayato type
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: So I ll pick him since I m so angry and fighter like
Suika: By the by - I sent you both the app link in discord PMs.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I ve download it
TatyCullen: Let me download it
Suika: Go on ahead.
TatyCullen: Okay got it
TatyCullen: Shall I go first?
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: /me walks slowly in the room looking at the two figures staring at him curious if his going to improve his skills in battle .He approaches Bunny analysing how she s dressed and then he opens his mouth having a deep masculine voice "I want to improve my skills in rp teacher .I hope I won t disappoint you".He then scratches his head his fingers touching the scar he got from a battle which happened long ago.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: It s a damn start or not arghhh!damn
TatyCullen: Wow that's really good
TatyCullen: This room lagging me though
Suika: That is a start!
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I just put anime it has an effect somehow
Suika: Don't forget your punctuation.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Nyaaa!!! ^~^
Suika: Also, don't use abbreviations.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: :c
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: So instead of rp I have to say roleplay?
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: That moment when the male teacher kisses the male student
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Ahm bunny still here?
TatyCullen: Lol oof
Suika: Of course.
Suika: xD
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: What anime did you made me watch ah?!
Suika: xDD
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I m not judging gay stuff
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: But it feels weird to be a male the none weaker gender
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: And be dominated by a non weaker
Suika: xD
Suika: That's an interesting way to put it.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Dominating the dominator hmmm
Suika: Not all males are dominators though.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Shame on them ! hmpf
TatyCullen: 0-0
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: You can be a dominator outside and a softy w the one you love
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: That s much easier :c
Suika: xD
Suika: Some guys are secretly females
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: O.o
TatyCullen: Is it Zer0?
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: You ruined my sleep now I swear
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Zero?nah
Suika: XD
TatyCullen: XD
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: He is a beast!!ihaa
Suika: Let's ask the 8ball xD
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Who knows what he's doing w his wife
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Oooo ask it
Suika: Oh my
TatyCullen: Eep
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: XD
Suika: 8ball said no
Suika: xD
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: XDDD
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I M DEAD
TatyCullen: Lol well then we got the answer
Suika: Okay, now. Octavia, explain the scene you have chosen from Diabolik Lovers.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Even the ball is frightened XD
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: yupy her thurn
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Turn*
TatyCullen: I pick the scene when you just arrive to see Ayato laying on the couch.
Suika: Re-enact.
TatyCullen: Yui*
TatyCullen: Okay a long post or doesn't matter
Suika: As long as you can.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Alright you start
Suika: Max your abilities.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Have to answer a phone call brb
Suika: tyt
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Back
Suika: Weba
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Hmm long post ah?
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: 18 minutes of posting
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: *whistles*
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: *whistles and smokes a cigarette
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: You still here bunny?
Suika: I'm still here.
Suika: I'm just waiting for her
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Hmmm...
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: 1 hour posting !
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Suika: Hello, welcome.
Suika: We're in the midst of a training session.
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: My bad. I joined off Octavia.
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: Should I leave?
Suika: She is currenly writing a post.
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: Clarify?
Suika: I shouldn't have to clarify, I'm being literal.
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: Like a post as in a status update?
Suika: No.
Suika: Roleplay.
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: Thats why I asked for clarification
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: ah ok
Suika: I said it was a training session
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: Well. Im untrained. So I wouldnt really know.
Suika: You're welcome to learn if you wish.
TatyCullen  The wheels of the SUV came to a complete holt as a female figure moves through the tint windows. The female proceeded to roll down the window her eyes squinches trying to make out the words printed on the golden gateway her body jumps at the sound of the driver's voice telling her she has reached her destination the woman scurries reaching for her cellular device grabbing a reddish-brown leather suitcase with taking a deep breath before pulling the handle of the door open she steps out as the breeze blows her golden hair the young female turns around noticing the driver impatient face expression as she closes the door stepping back a few feet as she holds her hands in front of her parting her lips to speak but before she can the ignition startles the woman as the wheels squeak speeding off into the distance. Whirling around she turns gripping hold of her suitcase pulling out a small cross with a reddish circle in the center from her pink cotton top making her way to the large mansion as she comes across two large big brass doors hesitate before knocking. The woman extends her wrists turning to knock with her back knuckles" H-Hello anyone home" she says softly stepping back realizing no one answer she wonders if anyone home stepping forward once more to knock again but the door slowly screened open before her knuckles can make contact turning as she grips her suitcase walking through as she can see the beautiful Victorious mansion in amazement she looks up seeing a very beautiful Chandelier as her eyes glance over every detail hearing the door slam behind her she walks a little further glancing to the left to see a young male with reddish hair laying on the couch still . Standing by the men she reaches the young men hand tapping it gently her eyes widened after feeling how cold his hands were she quickly leans down putting her ear to his chest" he's not breathing I just call for help"she her voice shaken yet loud pulling out her flip phone she starts to type before, she feels as cool hand gripping around her wrist tightly his golden eyes glaring at her sending chills down her spine.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: ((Jesus mother Christ now is my turn 1 h to this ))
Suika: ((Beautiful! You improved quickly!
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: ((Oh shit))
Guest_JustHereToGetBored: ((Well. You guys have fun.))
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TatyCullen: (Thank you that app really help sorry I took so long I am in phone)
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TatyCullen: Sorry crashed
Suika: ((It's okay. You should study using that app so you can write great without it, too.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: /me takes her phone while waking up from his vampirish deep sleep and sits up the couch. He looks at her angry being disturbed by the blonde girl's pitch voice and whispers: "Damn you are noisy. This is not even your house. Could you please try to keep it down?!".He then looks at the scared blonde girl while she is surprised that he is not dead although she checked his pulse minutes ago and she says: "Y...you are alive!". Ayato gets angry by the girl's astonishment and answers her with a deep bored voice: "Why wouldn't I be alive? Seriously, what do you think I am anyway?!".She continues her astonishment as she couldn't understand how he is alive if his heart does t even beat: "But your heart! it seemed to have stopped! W...wasn't beating at all!" .Ayato looked at the blonde girl being bored of the discussion he was having with her and grabs her waist putting her above him staring at her eyes with a dominant attitude. The blonde girl squirms under him being frightened by his movement: "W..what are you doing?!".He then replies with the same question she asked him while an evil smirk appeared on his face: "I think you already know...I am about to take you of course".While saying all this he approaches her neck licking it upwards and her sounds seemed to not quench his thirst for blood rather watering him with spring water looking to want more and he reaches with his fangs for her neck. He can't finish his plan because a deep serious voice interrupts the body electric momentum: "Ayato!what s all the commotion down here?" .He stops getting annoyed and looks at the tall presence recognizing that the figure is his big brother: "Dammit !it s Reiji!" .His brother stays in front of both with his arms crossed waiting for an explanation about Ayato's behavior: "Need I remind you that this is our entrance hall? We use this area exclusively to receive our guests.I must ask you to take your activities to your private room ". Ayato sits up beside the girl while she stands up scared by the two strange men and the red one replies to the interruption of his brother : " Oh whatever! You re such a buzz kill!". The girl looks at the strange tall man which has a grey hair and rectangular glasses with black frame and maroon blood like eyes : "will you help me?!please help me!".Reiji s attention is captured by the pitched frightened voice and asks :" And who you might be?".The blonde girl holds her hands around her arms frightened and takes the courage to answer :"I m Yuy Komori .My father told me I was supposed to live here but I don t know why?". Reiji thinks for a second and he replies serious being a bit angry not having an announcement about her arrival to the mansion : "Why wasn't I told about this? Ayato ,explain to me at once."Ayato gets angry about his brother s alpha attitude and has a fussy answer :"Hu?!How would I know anything about it ?This is news to me too.You never told you're moving in with us Pancake."Yui feels insulted by the impertinent answer and says nervous :" That's because you atacked me out of nowhere!I didn't had the chance to tell you anything...Hold on!you said pancake...were you talking about me?! "
Suika: ((Beautiful. You did great. That should help you get a feel about how it should be.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I hate it when I have to type a whole dialogue
Suika: Now, this is where the rule of Puppeteering comes in.
Suika: Controlling a character you do not own or claim to play as is against the rule as well.
Suika: Such as, having speak a dialogue, or making them move.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I thought of it somehow
Suika: See?
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Cause she had to answer but I would came up w a small post
Suika: That's where you adjust and improvise.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: So this is just an anime and nobody plays really the characters
Suika: You play your own character
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Got it
Suika: But in this scene, you play one character and she plays the other.
Suika: Yui vs ayato
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Damn my neck hurts from all this writing
Suika: Because you're on a phone lol
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: It s 00:00
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Hehehe
TatyCullen: Oh I get ot so basically we shouldn't have to be the other brother dialogue only your character that we're playing
Suika: Exactly.
Suika: Now you both have the sense.
Suika: You've learned two rules now in the process of learning to write.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: So basically we slowly move to t1 to already ?
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Rp*
Suika: Yup.
Suika: But in a combat situation, you can set up a series of attacks and do expectations. What'll happen when the move is dodged or blocked? What's the next move?
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Yas!!!
Suika: You can create a perfect flow in the process.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Hmm
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: For example?
TatyCullen: Kinda like we did yesterday
Suika: Let's take Naruto for example. He creates a series of clones and begins a chain attack. Whether or not they hit or miss, or get poofed, the real him and another set of two clones are creating a rasenshuriken. The clones essentially create an opening for him to go in with the rasenshuriken for a full-attack. The enemy could leap and dodge, but the writer is prepared and makes the note that if the enemy leaps into the air to dodge, Naruto would control the rasenshuriken from a distance and make it turn around to follow the enemy.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I start to think that I want to teach herbalism in this kingdom
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: This attack things exhaust me
Suika: It's strategy.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Have more to teach for tonight?
TatyCullen: Hmm what about my character from yesterday should I go at that differently?
Suika: You should expand on the type of vampire you are and your weaknesses, Octavia. More than anything. There are many types of lores on vampires.
TatyCullen: Hmmm noted.
Suika: Much like I'm a sorceress that specializes in magic traps.
Suika: Once you find your lore for your vampire, you can set your strategy.
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I found my type of wolf sounds like my type of character I m looking for
Suika: And there you go.
Suika: From there, you can start strategizing how you would move.
TatyCullen: Wait you're a wolf
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Ya
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: It s just likely for me
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: i can controle my wolf form
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Whenever I want it
TatyCullen: 0-0 -slides over a few inches-
TatyCullen: That's what they all say
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I m serious
TatyCullenTatyCullen Whisper: I believe you
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: The Ulfen are humans with lycantrope curse well the ancestors consider it more as a gift
TatyCullen: I see
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: Well
Guest_xXDarkKnightXx1: I ll finish the lesson here since it s night
TatyCullen: Poof
TatyCullen: Question s
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Suika: Hahah.
Suika: Tomorrow night, we will begin a proper spar.
TatyCullen: After reading his post i couldn't help but to notice som
TatyCullen: Something*
Suika: Yeah?
TatyCullen: His post sounded closer to the book version verse speaking like ayto himself?
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TatyCullen: Can you give me a few pointers? On my post
Guest_BrandyCampos: ? Me
TatyCullen: Plus now I know what you mean by finding the right vampire character.
Suika: Try to find your breaks. In the first sentence, second line, you could do a rephrase. End at, "Gateway." Start a new sentence at, "Her body" and then break a comma at "voice, telling". That should help.
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Suika: Of course.
Suika: Once you get your PC up, start doing your posts in your Word documents. Google + Grammarly will help with your punctuation better than what Grammarly by itself will do.
TatyCullen: Thank so much that was really helpful see you tomorrow sensei...and the app help me with the post my PC post who be way better and faster
TatyCullen: Thank you for your time ^^
Suika: It's no problem.
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