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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far but theres just a couple of things to work on before you can rank :)
- The front wall has nice detail and the back wall has a cool effect with the waterfall :D But some detail on the back wall would do the plot a lot of good, as its a bit too plain.
- The middle of the plot is a bit vacant, so try and put some terrain, maybe more towers or even organics in there to break the empty space!
- The towers on the sides are a bit iffy, so try and spruce those up a but more as well!
- The tree is decent btw :3
- Good luck with your plot!
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