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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot so far, but theres some stuff i think you should work on before ranking up!
- Youve got some decent terrain going on, but its a bit too rough. Smooth it just a little bit and you should be fine!
- The trees are decent, but theyre a little chunky, so smooth them out and fluff them up a bit more to give them more of a tree-like effect!
- The water falls are nice, but theyre a bit too large for such a small stream of water. Make sure the plot makes sense!
- The boat is nice, but as its the only structure on the plot, it needs to be much more complex! The body needs to be bigger and same with the masses. The sails need to match the size of the boat and show depth in them as if theres wind going through them!
- If you dont want to do that, adding more structures around the plot could be a better idea. They could be towers or little huts, hosues or whatever. As long as it matches!
- Good luck!
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