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- Hello GMANTUX2004!
- My name is xDraghun and I will being your plot again today ! :D Lets start with your structure.
- You do show improvement with detailing you structures, but u need some more. Try adding actual walls to your build. Then, implement the depth/detail. You main build doesn't even look like it has a roof so try to work on that. Again, refer to ./warp depthtutorial. Your stairway still needs extra detailing. Try to add a railing if u can.
- You trees are nice and custom made +1. Try to work on smoothing it down especially the leafy portion.
- You terrain is pretty nice but try to add more blocks for color and variation such as clay, cobblestone, andesite, etc. I recommend you make the bottom of the stream sand/sandstone too.
- You plot needs a little more work and effort put into it. Hopefully you will be rsnking up pretty soon. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission. :D
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