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Dies ir/a/e brainstorming

Dec 16th, 2017
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  1. Discord: https://discord.gg/EFhHgez
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  3. Character profiles:
  4. https://pastebin.com/VNitTLGm
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  6. Synopsis:
  7. May 1, 1945 ― Germany.
  8. On the eve of Berlin's collapse, a group of men and women carried out a certain ritual. To them, suffering defeat in the war meant nothing. If anything, the countless lives lost in the battle served as a catalyst to their sacrificial ceremony. Whether or not their attempt bore fruit ― not a soul knows. Following the war, they faded from sight, mind, and eventually into the realm of myth.
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  10. 72 years later ― Japan, 2017.
  11. Several months ago Shiro Azuma and his family suffered an unfortunate accident which resulted in his family's passing. Although he himself cannot recall the specifics of the accident due to the brain trauma it gave him, not a single day passed without Shiro blaming himself for their deaths and not a single night passed without Shiro being plagued by a horrible nightmare. He could not remember the last time he was permitted to have a pleasant dream; and thanks to the dementia he received from the accident, his everyday reality has been distorted by unspeakable delusions. Shiro loathes his present and he fears what the uncertain future might have in store for him. He is unable to even take his own life to escape all the pain, since he dreads the thought of what might come after death just as he dreads the unknown future. Would he burn in hell or would he be reunited with his beloved family? Or perhaps both? There was no way for him to know. Change or stagnation ― neither are an option for Shiro. And as if that wasn't enough, his friendship with his old buddy Akira was shattered to pieces following a certain incident which lead to a vicious fight that left Shiro hospitalized yet again.
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  13. As Shiro finally contemplates suicide in the hospital for the lack of better options, he meets a strange but beautiful girl who bears an eerie resemblance to his late little sister. She introduces herself as the Maiden of the Necronomicon, Geträumte Sünden, and states that she is looking for her älterer Bruder, Hänsel. Shiro is instantly entranced and does not want to be separated from Gretel, and asks her to live with him. She agrees.
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  15. The season shifts from autumn to winter ― to the dawning weeks of December, with Christmas on the horizon. Shiro leaves the hospital with the intention to rebuild his new life with Gretel. But even that plan soon falls apart. Irrationality that defies the realm of common sense begins to assault and devour the city. Abnormalities soon seek to destroy everything Shiro holds dear before his eyes with overwhelming violence. He must change, even if it means crossing the boundary between the ordinary and the extraordinary. His desires are hardly anything grand. All he wants is to return to those days of old. Back to those days filled with simple, everyday joy.
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  17. The battle with the Longinus Dreizehn Orden. A continuation of that war full of madness, carnage, and maledictions. What future awaits Shiro at the end of his road...?
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  20. Plot ideas from https://boards.4chan.org/a/thread/165818510
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  22. Routes (Umineko style):
  23. https://boards.4chan.org/a/thread/165818510#p165864386
  24. https://boards.4chan.org/a/thread/166074524#p166118382
  25. https://boards.4chan.org/a/thread/166074524#p166118769
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  27. >0. Shiro common route
  28. >1. Legend of the Golden Beast: Minami
  29. >2. Turn of the Golden Beast: Tsubaki
  30. >3. Banquet of the Golden Beast: Kaguya
  31. >4. Alliance of the Golden Beast: Gretel
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  33. >5. Reiji common route
  34. >6. End of the Golden Beast: Shinobu/Hikari
  35. >7. Dawn of the Golden Beast: Lisa
  36. >8. Requiem of the Golden Beast: Tamara
  37. >9. Twilight of the Golden Beast: Diana
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  39. >Second/True Beri'ahs (and Diana's Beri'ah) don't show up until the second half
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  41. Must-have fights:
  42. >Azazel vs Lucifer
  43. >Azazel vs 3 Commanders
  44. >Reiji vs Diana
  45. >Midas vs Lucifer
  46. >Midas vs Snake
  47. >Magnum vs Lucifer
  48. >Magnum vs Akira
  49. >Prometheia vs Samael
  50. >Diana vs Samael and Michael
  51. >??
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  53. Patrician tier pairings:
  54. https://boards.4chan.org/a/thread/165818510#p165862994
  55. >Shiro x Gretel
  56. >Shiro x Tamara
  57. >Reiji x Diana
  58. >Reiji x Hikari
  59. >Kaguya x Maheśvara
  60. >Akira x Erina
  61. >Brynhildr x Suzaku
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  63. Power & Autism levels:
  64. >Powerlevels are through the roof and off the rails since there are 64 Swastikas but for the most part the LDA members' powerlevels are actually pretty balanced relative to one another. There's less of a gap between the Commanders and the other members. Hell, the other members can even reach Erzengel level.
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  66. Azuma Shiro / Azazel Azoth:
  67. >Initially has an AZure color scheme (get it? Az?)
  68. >Has a rainbow/kaleidoscope color scheme post-Beri'ah
  69. >His berserkergang way of fighting makes Shakyamuni's pale in comparison
  70. >Fights are told from his opponents' POVs
  71. >Reiji doesn't COMPLETELY hijack his protagonist role in the second half
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  73. Gretel / Margaret:
  74. https://boards.4chan.org/a/thread/165818510#p165863934
  75. >Shiro's ability to make illusions and delusions real are in fact hers, not his.
  76. >Snake wants Shiro's imouto to become the next goddess and the reason why Gretel looks so much like her is because its actually his imouto's body but with the soul of the Necronomicon inside of it. Snake intends for Shiro to reach Atziluth and then have Imouto reclaim her body and turn her into a next goddess.
  77. >Her Heaven divides existence by trapping everyone inside of their own dreams. (http://www.strawpoll.me/14631311/r) In other words, she "embraces everything" like Marie by granting everyone's wishes.
  78.  
  79. >ALTERNATIVELY, if we go the EVA instrumentality route of uniting all the souls of mankind into one being then I have an idea for MC's imouto, Sora.
  80.  
  81. Azuma Sora:
  82. >Sora was born deaf and mute. As a result, she was never able to fully express herself or properly communicate with others. She developed autism and her disorders led to Gretel's ability to make illusions real: she wanted to project her thoughts into reality to make up for her inability to speak. She could communicate with her brother by projecting her thoughts inside of his mind but him aside, it was incredibly difficult for her to interact with others. Sora craved "to understand and to be understood". Through her and Gretel's law, everyone will be melded into one. Instead of existing individually, everyone will exist as a part of a whole. Here's another poll: http://www.strawpoll.me/14640761
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  84. Nishimura Reiji / Midas Philosophorum:
  85. >Like Reinhard (when he was the head of the Gestapo), Reiji harbored no ardent desires, nor any grand ideals to boast of. However, the circumstances behind the hole in his chest were different. Unlike Reinhard, Reiji lacked anyone to project onto him any dignity or glory.
  86. >He can justify just about anything with his "muh worthlessness". Belial can't hold a fucking candle to this guy. Wanna steal his powers? Too bad, there's nothing there to steal. Wanna debilitate him? Can't. He's already as weak as weak can be according to himself. To sum his "muh worthlessness" up: If a heinous sinner with a dramatic backstory were to be assigned a value of -100 and a wonderful saint who has a wonderful personality a value of +100 then Reiji would be somewhere around a 0 (not exactly 0, since that in itself would have value). In Reiji's head there isn't really much of a difference between the two since both share the same distance from 0. At worst, Reiji is a pebble on the side of the road. At best, a stepping stone for others. But of course, he isn't ever able to truly articulate his nigh-indescribable self loathing to anyone, mostly because of how embarrassing he finds his self-centered thoughts to be.
  87. >Snake doesn't really know who the fuck this dude is
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  89. >Starting from his common route he'll gradually shift from background character to minor character to side character to main character to tritagonist to deuteragonist and finally to protagonist.
  90. >After he acquires his Beri'ah and becomes Midas, the story will become kinetic.
  91. >As someone who was once neglected by fate, Midas tries to treat everyone equally so as to not neglect anyone himself.
  92. >Midas can overcome the peak of Azazel's time/causality manipulation and authority over change with nothing but pure autism and twisted logic. He supposes that all that has ever happened and will happen is all just a part of one big "cause" that has not produced an "effect" yet. Or perhaps everything is just one big "effect" that is already taking place? Mercurius' law also effectively screws Azazel over -- if everything is predestined, then does "causality" really exist? What the hell is "time" anyway? Therefore, Azazel cannot deny him the rights to "change" anything.
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  94. Noro Akira:
  95. >The friendship between Shiro and Akira was shattered to pieces two months ago when Akira tried to free Shiro from his guilt and depression. Akira's poor choice of actions and words lead to a vicious fight which hospitalized the both of them.
  96. >"Magic isn't real."
  97. >excuse my usage of /r9k/ memes but Akira is the smug NEET pepe to Magnum's wagecuck Wojak
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  99. Shiba Genzō / Maheśvara:
  100. >He has to choose between seeing his children again or saving Kaguya.
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  102. Erik Weißmann / Magnum Innominandum:
  103. >he's "that guy"
  104. >poor as fuck
  105. >"reee why don't I have a Beri'ah" (until the second half and also getting consumed by the void doesn't count)
  106. >Unlike Bey, who had a personal vendetta against Schreiber, our absolute madman Magnum wants it all and instead of trying to steal an Erzengel position from Diana or Michael he challenges Lucifer himself
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  108. Hildegard von Wilhelm / Brynhildr:
  109. >For /u/fags: she's Samael's power bottom
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  111. Tachibana Tsubaki / Prometheia Aschfahl:
  112. https://boards.4chan.org/a/thread/165818510#p165853864
  113. >11 years ago, she inadvertently discovered what Luciferius' Heaven would be like and wanted to achieve it for herself. But at the same time, although the Tachibana clan was a Methuselah+ tier threat for the LD/a/, she realized that there was literally no way for them to win in the long run so she plotted Suzaku and Hilde's deaths (so that she could personally hold onto their souls)to gain the LD/a/'s favor and join them. She wants to revive them with the Transmutation of Gold and usurp Lucifer's Heaven. But as we all know chasing two hares will get you neither.
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  115. Adam / Wundervolles Erdenkind:
  116. >He was literally grown and cultured out of the ground with Lucifer and Lisa's gametes.
  117. >His titan form is basically Super TTGL when the Gold elevates his abilities to Atziluth level.
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  119. Tamara / Tomás de Torquemada:
  120. >She has literally forgotten her last name. It's been around 700 years or so after all.
  121. >Tamara is not as strong as she should be due to her age. Her cupio dissolvi is really starting to bite her in the ass by the time Dies ir/a/e starts.
  122. >Her Yetzirah is pretty much a spookier version of Gate of Babylon. It includes the blood of Vlad the Impaler, Elizabeth Bathory's diary, and much, much more. But nonetheless Midas can turn her treasured collection to shit with his touch.
  123. >Tamara's collection came to be as a result of her centuries-long quest to turn back time and/or revive the dead.
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  125. Kawakami Shinobu / ???:
  126. >Only a select few of the LDA are aware of her existence as the first No. X
  127. >The fact that she's an LDA member isn't actually revealed until the second half
  128.  
  129. Konrad Geßner / Rattenkönig:
  130. >He becomes more than just a tutorial boss after Reiji appears.
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  132. Lisa Dawn Goldstein / Corona Meretrix:
  133. >Not actually a slut(?). Adam/Erdenkind was brought into existence without any sex involved; so she's like the Virgin Mary in that sense.
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  135. Diana Jäger / Nebrophonos:
  136. >Cyrus saved her from a life on the streets. As a result, she strived to be like him. Unfortunately, her aptitude for killing and hunting lead her to life rife with bloodshed.
  137. >She's a complete aho outside of battle but a genius when hunting.
  138. >Underneath her eyepatch she possesses a golden glowing eye that she unveils when shifting to Archer mode. For the extra chuuni factor. Odin (and by extension Schreiber) sacrificed an eye for power. Diana, on the other end of the spectrum, will gain one. Diana being the aho that she is thinks that the eyepatch seals her power(it doesn't but no one has the balls to tell her).
  139. >Diana's bow: Naturally, it lacks a bowstring since it's formed by joining two sabers. She doesn't have any arrows to use with it either. Instead, she has Typhon's highly pressurized "air" act as a bowstring. Whenever she pulls on it the air shreds her fingers and she uses her coagulated blood to form its arrows.
  140. >In her route Diana decides to try out school for once. At the same time she is also tasked on keeping an eye out for any suspicious behavior of the other LDA members. Prometheia and Tamara are utrerly scared of her joining the school they are in and are basically trying their best to keep her calm. This also prevents the other members from opening up the Swastika there.
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  142. Supplementary ideas:
  143. >https://boards.4chan.org/a/thread/165818510#p165866618
  144. >Idea-anon here. In Diana's route Azazel kills Cyrus with secret aid of Snake who realised Cyrus knew the truth of his plan. Diana and Reiji then find the near death Cyrus and it gets revealed that they are father and daughter. Cyrus then gives Excalibur and Clarent to Diana and tells them to stop Snake. Final battle is Diana/Reiji vs Snake and Azazel.
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