Tracks of Cherry Blossoms json review

509210-2_ejUmE
Nemu: We can't rule out the possibility that you have an@ability to make flowers bloom we're unaware of. --> flows a bit weird to me; maybe change to "We can't rule out the possibility that you have an@ability we're unaware of to make flowers bloom." or remove "we're unaware of"


509210-4_ejUmE
Eternal Sakura: | Is that over 80 years ago? | --> change "Is" to "Was"


509210-5_ejUmE
Eternal Sakura: (Ah...) --> add her speaking slashes |  | inside the parentheses


509210-9_ejUmE
Nemu: Of course --> add a period
< 4 Days Ago> --> add a space before the >


509210-9_ejUmE
(remove the space after the line break for these)
- When our daughter was born, we brought her@ here.
- We used to have our annual cherry blossom@ viewing here.


509210-17_ejUmE
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- Manaka: —Manaka—@It's a new dessert made from@Walnut's classic cherry blossom cookies!
- Manaka: —Manaka—@The previous product is gone, but the tradition of the@cherry blossom desserts are alive and well!
- Himika: —Himika—@Th-th-this work of art...@If I eat this, won't I face divine punishment?!
- Eternal Sakura: —Eternal Sakura—@(I thought the cookies were gone,@but now they're back in another form...)

(add her speaking slashes |  | inside the parentheses)
- Eternal Sakura: (I'm sure she's correct.)
- Eternal Sakura: (If gods exist, perhaps they'd be just like me.)
- Eternal Sakura: (People live so fast, we wonder if we'll be left@behind.)


509210-20_ejUmE
Separate this line after the motion_200 command. It made the rest of the dialogue/visuals afterward desync.
Ryo: The Girl Under the Sakura Tree...[chara:304601:cheek_0][chara:304601:motion_200][flashEffect:flashWhite1][surround:7023_camera]*Click-click*


509210-21_ejUmE
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| There are still so many things I don't know.@I mistakenly believed that people part@when cherry blossoms bloom,@but I learned that there are actually many@kinds of encounters and goodbyes. |