-the sane amount of enemy spawns --> teh same number of enemy spawns
-with the Empire, and we suspect --> with the Empire. We suspect
-Furthermore, it's said --> Furthermore, it is said
-it's something he read on it --> it's something he read in it
-When the soldiers arrived, it was already too late. Not only we didn’t find you, or the lich Mal Keshar, --> By the time the soldiers arrived, it was laready too late. Not only did we not find you or the lich Mal Keshar
-essential to puttin an end --> essential for putting an end