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The Dream that Transcends Today corrections (only Part 3)

Feb 6th, 2021 (edited)
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  1. line 123: It it fine for you to not be helping the shrine now? --> change "It it" to "Is it"
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  3. line 189: Chi chi chi... --> Tch tch tch...
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  5. line 388: We watched each other closely so we got perfectly in no time! --> change "perfectly" to "perfect"
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  7. line 948: so we will have to protect is somehow while we're fighting... --> replace "is" with "it"
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